Looting Begins in the World of Tomb Robbers

The introduction was pretty good. I originally planned to read it for a while and invest in it, but I couldn't hold on until I read Chapter 20 and died from the poison.

I've read three chapters, it's so addictive! The writing style is childish. I suggest the author switch to writing fairy tales. You are not suitable for writing novels.

I don't know if the author will read it after he writes it. Some parts are really embarrassing. I hope the more he writes, the better it will be.

A tomb robbing novel was suddenly changed into a fantasy novel and slipped away! !

After reading these twenty chapters, I would like to say that the author's writing is too complicated and messy, without a beginning or end, so that people can't figure out what the author wants to express? It's written like a running account of several tomb robbing plots, with the protagonist and the author's writing added into it, but it's too blunt.

The collapsing world is the only way forward for the predators.

The bones of the world are the traces left by the plunderers.

Loot all the heavens and all realms and achieve the true form of all realms.

If you are creative, the author can read more tomb-robbing novels for inspiration.

The tomb robbing plot in this book doesn't feel that tense and scary.

Can the protagonist's role in robbing a tomb be made more serious? It's written as if it's for fun.

The infinite world is a mountain conquered by predators.

I hope the author can change his style and write a really good tomb robbing novel

The writing is getting worse. Can tomb robbers be more professional? Why are so many tomb robbers just like visiting a park? I just want to know whether the protagonist is robbing tombs or to fall in love.

This book is not an exclusive tomb-robbery novel. "Plundering Begins in the World of Grave Robbery". The title of the novel already makes it clear that this is a book about astronomy, astronomy, astronomy. The important things are mentioned three times. Since it is Zhu Tianwen, the plot of the tomb robbery must be very different from the original work, otherwise it will not be connected with the future world. Furthermore, the author's setting for the protagonist is that of a pure warrior, with no fighting skills. He only knows how to fight, and he can only fight. It is impossible for the author to give up the entire world for the sake of one world.

Ah! Finally signed a contract! Here I wish my book to become popular as soon as possible! Oh yeah! Another perfect day!

After reading five chapters, I vomited! At first, I thought it was an invincible article that was promoted all the way. When I saw how the protagonist despised An-Ning, I thought he was a straight man, but then I turned around and saw all kinds of self-help strategies for An-Ning! Get away! Abandon the book!

It's poisonous at the beginning, but Shen Nong couldn't hold on for half a chapter. 😰

Author, your force value is too high. It doesn't matter if you can kill thousands of zombies through the air. You can also spit out ice. The key point is that you have the indestructible power of the Vajra. That's a bit too much.

Writing about a tomb robber, even the Dragon God appeared. The problem is that this dragon is not named Ao, but an alien. This poisoned me.

I don't want to subscribe to this book. The protagonist is a senior dog licker. At the beginning, he talked about how bad A Ning is. In the next chapter, he immediately took Ah Ning to mess around. After some chapters, he talked about how bad A Ning was, and then started to be a dog licker again in the next chapter. Such a protagonist has no motivation to continue reading, so I don't even subscribe to the first VIP chapter.

It's so poisonous. I was poisoned when I saw the panel and then saw the thousand-year-old zombies being beaten into pieces with twice the physical strength of ordinary people. Which of the elites in the tomb robbers is not stronger than twice the human body?

I laughed at the descriptions of Aning in the first few pictures at the beginning, so poisonous

In fact, when I read this kind of novel and saw that the protagonist wanted to be immortal, I couldn't figure it out at all. Do you have the Qin Empire to control? You are the Xiongnu who has not yet been destroyed. Isn't the country rich and strong? Why do you want to live forever? This protagonist has no father, no mother, no wife, no friends, and no children! Why do you want to live forever?

Ah Ning, aren't you disgusted by what you wrote like this?

The protagonist gives people a feeling of being mentally ill. He starts talking about what happened to Aning, and later saves her. How could he be like this? Oh~ it makes my head hurt to watch it. The preface and the afterword are inconsistent. Goodbye everyone.

Dear bosses, my little brother's cultivation is low and he can't withstand this poison, so I'll take my leave now.

What should I do if I have no inspiration for writing a novel? System! Open my properties, hey, another thousand words have been lost.

What is written? Who doesn't know Aning? Oh, my heart is beating, oh! Shy, oh! Written by Xiang! Borrowing something from others is borrowing something from others. What has been changed? It's really strong.

Fuck. That's awesome... There is a dragon or a dragon god in Qixing Lu Palace, and then what? Was he killed by someone who had practiced the indestructible power of the Vajra? ? ? A dragon god who has lived for thousands of years?