Slitgam's Shattered Fantasy

Author, I would like to discuss the plot with you. Both adventures are won by relying on chemical knowledge. They are based on reality, alternating hot and cold, and I know all about dust explosions. Should I also add some fantasy plot? Since there is magic, Longjing can learn some unique magic (preferably one-time, I feel like Goldfinger). It's just that the routines don't need to be the same, it will be very boring (I read a lot of novels, so I know a lot about the routines and hope to see something different) Also, I concluded that Dou Po became famous because he set a goal, which was a three-year agreement to save his master and his father. The plot is coherent, you write the situation according to the situation, and practice your skills in the early stage. In the later stage, we can complicate it and connect the various adventure tasks. For example, the first time, they were almost robbed, but that group of people did not die. You can arrange the next task to stumble the protagonist. The Conan I can think of usually has ordinary plots. The occasional plot version or the fight with the man in black are all very enjoyable to watch. (Not that kind of cool article). We don't necessarily have to imitate them. We have to surpass them on the basis of learning from them and write our own things that others don't have. Come on

I came across this book by chance. The content is good and the plot is compact. Big boost to the author!!

Well written, keep it up and invest.

Note to readers: This book will not be very long, it is just a prequel. But it is definitely the author's hard work. I will also make progress slowly. I hope everyone can make suggestions and the author will adopt them. I love you (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡

A super readable book, I was so blown away! If you are a newbie reading this, just listen to me. Just go through the prologue a little and write down the information. You will know after reading the first volume, it is beautiful! So delicious! The realistic description with a little bit of blood, the dark environment, the atmosphere, the feeling is simply amazing. When you read, you won't know where the foreshadowing is. Maybe that sentence is a clue or a foreshadowing. The story is really well written! The only thing is that the author's appearance description is not very skillful. I hope to improve it. It is really a good unmanned series. I like this book very much as I like the novel style of gray fantasy. I hope you won't stop updating!

It's a bit short. When will the new book be released?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Author, since we have finished writing, we will finish the book?

Not bad! Collected! Take your time and watch! Keep it up! Stable updates! Welcome to visit us again!

1. So? Is studying just to live, work, support your family, and just live your whole life? It's very true, but there is so much helplessness in this world, how many people can escape! 2. The preface gives me a sense of plainness and quiet beauty. The main text of the first chapter breaks out of this framework again, and the main text is here, so there is contrast and it seems attractive enough. But for those who are watching it for the first time, even if you tell them that they can skip the sequence, I don't think many people will skip it! 3. The characterization always feels a bit narrative, so I suggest you find the right direction! Don't ruin the sense of immersion. The article is very interesting, please like it! Come on