League of Legends Mobile Game Battle Canyon

How should I put it? I have read 5 chapters in total and I really can't stand it anymore. Let me tell you my opinion First, there are many unnecessary annotations, such as beep blind (it seems to be this one), which can be replaced by some easy-to-understand words, such as random killing, etc. And nice. I think everyone should know it Second, Rune Heroes, there is no need to be so specific, because your audience is the LOL group, just point out some things that are different from the PC game, including the summoner skills that are included in the game. You don't need to write the name, just use the hero name instead. For example, if two people encounter the same person, you can write it, and other passers-by are not necessary ​​​​​​​​ I won't go into details Fourth, in terms of writing, the good things are relatively immature, and the bad things are just incomprehensible. I looked at the end and said that this is a story dedicated to lol lovers, but your main text is about a bunch of people relying on power leveling to become the king. It is not honorable at all, and it does not have the core of its own article Finally, I recommend you to go Take a look at the rhythm of similar game articles, such as passionate articles like "Who vs. Confrontation" or some light-hearted and humorous game articles, and hope to make progress (ps: Don't go elsewhere to attract traffic. I read the first 5 chapters with the intention of cursing, but it seems that you like to write articles, so forget it) (ps2: I wrote it at night, please forgive me for typos)

I won't translate the mobile game runes, it's too troublesome! 🤭🤭

If you have any ideas about this novel, you can tell me, for example, which hero's background story you want to see, or which hero's skill combo you want to know. 😰😰

Emerald player passing by🤓

How should I put it, not very mature.

Did you unplug it just after the public beta? Write quickly!