Titled Qilin of Douluo

Make a suggestion. If the protagonist is following Tang San, he must not become a master. Then there is the need to make changes to the Shrek Seven Devils. Just like the original Tang San, he would kill people if he disagreed with him. Later, his temper became much better after joining the master. This also shows that Tang San can change, so you can write the protagonist from this aspect so that the protagonist is not transparent. The second thing is about the issue of Wuhun Palace, you have to handle it well. Just like there was no mortal enmity between Tang San and Bibi Dong. It can even be said that they helped each other avenge each other, but later because Xiao Wu was exposed, they formed a new hatred. You can also change the ending from this aspect, so that the protagonist will not become transparent.

You, a level 10 soul master, can defeat a dark gold Dreadclaw bear that has been around for thousands of years. I'm so sorry. 😅😅😅

Well done, this is how you should treat the sand sculpture master

The Dark Gold Terrorclaw Bear is a top-level soul beast. A hundred years equals a thousand years. You start with a thousand years. What will you write next?

Writing exciting points about fighting is already very brainless. You can see it from the first soul ring. After the brainless fight, there is a brainless pretense. This book will not be interesting.

If I tell you that, I will join the investment group (I will also give you a recommendation vote) 🤭

It's Tang San again, I'm drunk

The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work

Well written, but I don't have the money to reward

I just want to ask if there is a harem? 🤔

Received Request for mutual visit

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I've given you the vote. Come on. Not many people will read 100,000 words. I need the author to keep up the good work.

I'll give you a small ticket, please update it quickly.

Awesome, 15 chapters completed 😰