My Unscientific Brain

It's okay to read now, but it needs to be updated more. The word count is too few and it's not enough to read.

I still like the style of this book, but after more than thirty chapters, I think a major problem is that I can't see where the main line is. I think there is no problem with the author's character description, and the personality of each character is reflected. Various technical explanations are also available. Although it seems a bit hard-core, it can also be used as a point of view. But after dozens of chapters, I can't find the advancement of the main line, and I don't even know what the main line is. From the introduction, this book should be about black technology. How the protagonist starts a business to change the world and competes with other corporate groups in society should be the main line. But starting from high school, such entrepreneurship has not been seen for the time being, and the college entrance examination is not the main line. From the plot I have seen now, I feel that the protagonist promotes the development of the world in the dark web and makes steady progress in real life. It should be the author's idea. But one problem is that the golden finger really has no sense of existence. After the protagonist gained new knowledge through the game, he started the biology competition line and the psychology club line. In the middle, he added the speech line, the line of fooling the computer design president, and the line of the casino. It was too divided, and the development of his own cheat finger was too slow, and even the knowledge gained was not used. So, I think the author can cut down the branch lines, let the protagonist return to the understanding of focusing on his own body, develop cheats, and use cheats to advance the main line. Two branch lines appear at the same time, which is enough. The speech will start immediately, and it is also an easy and enjoyable place to write. I think I can continue, and then other lines can be accelerated appropriately. The above are my personal thoughts. It is up to the author to decide how to deal with these plots. My main suggestion is to speed up the main line or clarify the main line and what the protagonist wants to do.

The introduction is very attractive, but the content is boring. It's all about showing off the protagonist's IQ. It's shown from all aspects. It feels unnecessary and doesn't do anything practical. I feel like I can do anything, but just don't do it. What's the investment-output ratio? I hope it won't be so obvious in the future. I watched part of it and then fast forwarded. Some may not have seen it. Personal opinion. Don't comment if you don't like it.

The characters, details, technology and even cognition are all well described, but there is no main line. Maybe the author's own outline has a main line, but you have to describe it so that readers know that the protagonist is a person with a long-term plan, not just like a headless fly who clicks here and there. Why games make people addicted is because they give players goals and behavioral feedback

Didn't you understand the previous chapters? You should have a purpose when doing something, right? So what is the protagonist's purpose? Why do it if there is no purpose? This. . . . I feel like things in that computer club are very confusing. . . . I don't know what the author wants to express?_? The protagonist doesn't know what he's thinking?_? It feels like he's just pretending to have no meaning. . . I was a little confused after reading the first few chapters.

Brain... You have grown up... You should learn to learn by yourself... Research by yourself... Upgrade your brain by yourself... Integrate your body by yourself... Ah???

Finished??! It's so fast😢 I haven't seen enough yet, I finally dug it out, I'm dying😭

Finished with flowers😁😁

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The author is very worried. Many people have talked to me about black technology, but why no one has talked to me about the characters in the novel? Personally, I feel that the characters I write should be quite interesting. In my opinion, the characters in novels should not be labeled characters, nor should they just be tools to promote the plot. To borrow a word from Virginia Woolf - people should not be still lifes placed in a vase for people to watch, but spread out on the grassland and dance with the wind. Every character who appears in the play, including the protagonist, has a flawed and incomplete personality. Apart from the hard science fiction part, the daily plot is also a youth novel.