Douluo's Golden Shining

To be honest, the front part is really good. The author started to let himself go since meeting Tang San. There is no emotional foreshadowing. There are a lot of nymphos. I even doubt whether they were written by the same person. It's a pity. There are too many female characters and the writing style can't be controlled. It seems really... If the full score is 10 points, 9 points before meeting Tang San. 7 Points after meeting. 6 Points after meeting. I didn't read the rest. Too many nymphos can't hold on.

Damn it, this book is extremely poisonous, extremely poisonous.

You have already accepted Jin Pika's inheritance and you still want to become a disciple? Is it because the ax is no longer fragrant or the EA can no longer be lifted?

To be honest, the first hundred chapters are very exciting, but in the end it gradually becomes less interesting and interesting.

I am quite optimistic about this novel by the author. The characters and plot are very good. Come on, author!

Joined the Spirit Hall, punched Shrek, kicked jade waste, married Qian Renxue, became the new pope, raised a beautiful mother-in-law, unified the entire continent, and reached the pinnacle of his life.

Qian Renxue! ! !

Jin Shining is the Uruk axe, Solomon is the Israeli boxing champion

First, is the protagonist Su Yuntian or Jin Shining? The second one, the knife is on your neck, you are still red and white, can you please? Third, my level is so low that I can only write this kind of plot. If you have an opinion, write it down!

The hidden master of the harem is absolutely the empress of the palace

It's obviously a very creative novel, but it has to be written as a stallion, ugh

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I think there's nothing wrong with the heroine being Qian Renxue. Like netizen YY's Jin Shining Shining and My King, I feel that My King and Qian Renxue are very similar.

I have a suggestion (´-ω-`), how about killing Tang San and pulling out her soul bones and soul rings while Tang San and Xiao Wu are still unfamiliar with her 😏

Female protagonist (manual funny) Sparkling Love😜😜🤐

Niang Shining

What kind of brain circuit does the author have to think of bringing Su Yuntao and Meng Yiran together? ? ? Brotherly love shouldn't be like this, right? ? Even if you don't have any brains, can Meng Yiran, the Unparalleled Dragon Snake, have a broken brain and accept it? ? ? How about Pig's Feet becoming a god and bringing Bibi Dong and Su Yuntao together? ? ?

Come on, has the protagonist never seen a woman in his previous life? It's really bulldozing. All the heroines with names and surnames belong to the protagonist. None of the female protagonists in Invincible novels can be promoted like you. The most disgusting thing is that those who have boyfriends and have children have to be robbed. Some of them fall in love with the protagonist for no reason. If the author continues at this rate, there will be at least 30 female protagonists in 1 million words. They are more stud than most stallion novels. There is nothing else in their minds except women.

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The Original Heroic Spirit The Strongest Heroic Spirit The Invincible Servant One of the Strongest in Human History A Heroic Spirit that maintains an absolute advantage against any Heroic Spirit The Heroic Spirit Killer who is dubbed the strongest The strongest existence among Servants without a doubt EX-level Servant An unrivaled Servant if he fights seriously Get The complete form of the transcendent who has gained everything in the world, no one in the world can match him A guide greater than anyone else Has the original code of all Noble Phantasms, possesses high abilities that other heroic spirits cannot compare with That hero can even cut the entire world in half, and is undoubtedly the strongest opponent in the world The highest level of strength among the servants EX, etc. Super Servant The absolute strongest in the battle against heroic spirits The owner of countless Noble Phantasms, the oldest hero king with extraordinary power, possessing extraordinary abilities The benchmark of Max Servants The oldest and strongest hero The Strongest King The heroic spirit standing at the pinnacle of the strong The oldest hero in the world The strongest of the era Existence The King of Kings, the pinnacle of heroes among heroes The superior position of all heroes and kings The judge who is endowed with the principles of heaven and earth The extraordinary heroic spirit that transcends the norm These are the titles given to me by my son (mushroom), brag as much as you like, as for those black men, feel free to be black, anyway, this is what my son said 🪖

Are you a king? A living loser

The attire worn while traveling through the major soul master academies in the Tiandou Empire. The red lining is the holy cloth of Magdalene, which has special defensive properties against men. I once wore this coat to participate in the team battle between Emperor Dou and Shrek Seven Monsters.

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Twin Martial Souls 1 The Key of King's Law (the key to King's Treasure House), inherited from Jin Shining. In the early stage, he majored in martial arts. 2 Death Announcement Angel (Four Wings), inherited from King Hassan. Awakened at the age of 11, with soul power level 6 at the time of awakening.

Well, is Rongrong the heroine? 🧐

Actually, the protagonist is probably a sub-servant. I hope the author can write more fighting scenes. I originally wanted to write a novel of the same type as the author. It was found that servants with only one class had too few skills. Or the quality doesn't feel high. It is written that the feeling for the divine Noble Phantasm is not as strong as that of the Douluo native gods. I don't know how the third young master of the Tang family set it up. I feel that the combat power of Ultimate Douluo is not that exaggerated. But after becoming a god, he will destroy the world. And I feel that the soul master is the mage. Without soul power, it is garbage.

I feel that if the protagonist reaches a status similar to that of the Holy Son in the Wuhun Palace, when fighting Tang San and the others, the rule about not being allowed to bring anything outside the body into the field can be removed. In this way, hidden weapons and noble phantoms are available. Maybe some people will be dissatisfied with this rule, so the protagonist can just say wait and see, if some people think that Tang San and the others can use the external things better. Because Shrek who doesn't use external things and Shrek who uses external things are like a tiger that has had its teeth pulled out. Another thing is that the author feels that his writing skills are strong enough to write an anxious scene of confrontation between a hidden weapon and a noble phantom. Some suggestions, I hope you will adopt them.

Stupid article, even a dog won't read it

I hope the author can continue writing, because of your fanfic, I have made up for the fate again. Then I fell in love with Jin Shining. After all, there are really few villains on the screen that people can like. For example, Ming Ge in One Piece, the Godly Sword in Kamen Rider Armor, Gridome in Bleach, the Magic King in Fairy Tail...

The only failure was to go to Qian Renxue too early, and there was too little description of Qian Renxue in the early stage.