Beanli Izakaya

Book review, may contain minor spoilers. I always like to point and point at things written by others, but when I read this work, I didn't have the time to nag at all. Recall that this is a story of exposure to wonderful things. Looking back again, I think it was very successful. Although the author's description level in terms of sentence segmentation, paragraphing, psychological activities and emotional expression is indeed somewhat insufficient. But it can't stand the author's simple and interesting character creation. The fullness of the characters gives the audience an immersive reading experience. Therefore, in actual reading, it is much more beautiful than those Ma Liang-type Internet articles with "brilliant writing". I have read Chapter 20 so far... I would like to say that there is a problem with the rhythm of the story: many times it feels like more details about the performance of other characters should be explained, but they are all passed quickly, and the plot in the previous chapters goes too fast. Although in retrospect it can be explained that Shasha (obviously Shasha) used charm, the interaction between the characters still seemed a bit rushed. Starting from the dream, it changed a bit from the previous trend and gave a very detailed description. This also resulted in an unusually long dream, creating an unnatural contrast with the fast and excessive real-life plot (it's a bit weird to read that the passage of time suddenly slows down, so it is recommended that the audience get used to the rhythm of some detailed descriptions first). It's just that the other characters in the dream are very full-featured, and there are some wonderful elements that attract attention and arouse a good sense of immersion. I kind of forgot that I was originally going to point out that the dream sequence is actually a bit of a drag on the unfolding of the plot. (What? Am I under a spell?) There is no trace of the main plot within 50,000 words, but it still made me read happily with relish. Because there are many wonderful settings in the book, it really makes people feel like watching the whimsical animation version. (I originally wanted to point out some shortcomings in the book review, why do I keep praising it?) At first, I was very worried that mentioning Fuso Country was another two-dimensional masterpiece, but after actually reading it, the treatment of foreign countries is very natural. There are no two-dimensional terms and no two-dimensional super powers. It just has a sense of relevance to the daily fantasies of students studying abroad in Japan. Although I don't know what kind of story this will be... But I am very happy to watch it. The work is very serious and focused. Apart from some emotional expressions, I haven't seen any conceptual content expressed through the works yet. Maybe, maybe not. But actually it doesn't seem that important to this work.

As the first poster of this book, I want to tell everyone who comes after me: The author of this book has eight-pack abs and two-meter-long legs. He will post photos when he collects more than 10,000 pieces.

Well, I read part of it. It's a refreshing and artistic story. It's my favorite style. It's a very unique world. I recommend it to everyone 😚😚😚

The writing is exquisite! The perspective is unique and interesting! Collected! Take your time and watch! More updates! Come on! Welcome to visit us again!

It's really good to read and well written. The author would like to work hard to update it. It has been collected. Welcome to visit again!

The writing is very attitude~~I enjoyed reading it~~

Collect it first, watch slowly, come on!

Come on and update 😁

The new year is about to begin! I hope your work will sell well and gain many fans! Come on!

Good morning! Come visit! Come on!

Author, have a good weekend. Congratulations on finishing the book! ! !

Happy New Year, author. May the new year bring you more prosperity.