Book Rental Shop No. 8

There is a small detail in the dialogue. Example: "Look! Look!" He pointed to the mobile phone in his hand and said hurriedly, "The novel written by this author is really good!" The word "hurriedly" in the above example sentence is followed by a comma instead of a colon. It's just a small detail, innocuous. Also, pay attention to typesetting. The above sentence "I saw that the words on the cover have disappeared" can be used in another paragraph, which can also be used as an emphasis. Above, after the fat man finished speaking, it is best to start a new paragraph for the actions he performed, otherwise it will be very lengthy. At the same time, it is best not to exceed six or seven lines of text. For example, the one below is too long. Come on, author!

I was bombarded by the toad boss. This kind of comment is really rare.

What can I do if Kangkang

What the hell is the introduction? I can't understand it so I quit.

What do you mean, drop two collections and then finish the book?

No matter what, I still need to be encouraged to apply for the book directly without a eunuch 😁, and 5 recommendation votes have been cast (actually because I got 299 points from the investment in the new book)