I Have Traveled Through Time and Come Back Again

... The writing was quite joyful, and it made me see the glorious side of human nature, and I was blinded by it! The protagonist has just developed a little internal strength and immediately shares it with his younger brother. He happens to meet his younger brother's girlfriend. Their childhood sweetheart, his sister-in-law, isn't it just a matter of luck? ? Forced by money? Super memory, is this ability so worthless? Are there no channels? How much non-toxic traditional Chinese medicine can you buy? As long as you have the money, most pharmacies won't even bother to ask! Writing this, some people may have said, if you don't even believe your parents and relatives, who can you believe? 😅 The sages have long said that if you are poor, you can only benefit yourself; if you are rich, you can help the world! Your parents and relatives will definitely be the first in line when the time comes. Do you not believe that? But innocence, both inside and outside the play, is a just word only for children under 5 years old!

How many people have given up immediately after seeing that they have traveled to another world, traveled back to another world, and returned to another world.

Do you really think you are a great god? Why don't you just play group portraits here? Reading this type of novel is for fun. Don't write so many irrelevant side characters. It won't have any impact if you delete the Qingcheng Mountain section. Why, you want to highlight the cruelty of the world? Then don't write as much as you usually do! And when fighting, don't insert psychological activities at inappropriate places, you know? Very disruptive to the reading experience!

The writing is average. I understand what the author wants to express. However, his vision was still too low. Just like a child who gets a toy and wants to show it to others right away, the protagonist teaches the martial arts he learned in the martial arts world to his relatives and friends, not to mention his parents and brothers, as long as you can grasp the plot well. But to be honest, I personally don't recommend writing this. Because people with a bad heart can't grasp this degree. It's likely to get you into trouble later. As the saying goes, water can carry a boat and also capsize it. It is best to have martial arts by yourself. In the world of ordinary people, we should not let too many people become extraordinary. I suggest you write more plots in the martial arts world. It would be better to write less about the present world. Furthermore, your protagonist is too silly. For example, was he easily intimidated by his brother's girlfriend at first? What you write like this is the same as those so-called Immortal Emperors returning and being unable to walk when they see a beautiful woman. Poison point. Don't tell me that you will travel to the world of martial arts for 16 years. I just want you to stay in the cell for a year. After you come out, you won't have such a fearful behavior. Harmful... I have read a lot of similar poisonous books. For example, someone traveled to another world and finally became the emperor. Traveling back to the city, I feel like blushing when being approached by a beautiful woman... That's it, author, please take good care of it. Create a cold-hearted protagonist with a strong heart. Don't be a loser and have the mentality of an ordinary person.

Chapter 39 and Chapter 40 successfully persuaded him to quit in the fight scene. If you're not good at fighting scenes, just skip them in a few sentences. There are too many superfluous words and descriptions about various inner scenes and the number one and number two role player.

The male protagonist has been practicing Taoism for 16 years. Has his calm mind been fed to the dog? Also, the male protagonist has told his family not to tell anyone about his martial arts knowledge. The male protagonist's relatives want to show it to others after he has learned it. Did everything the male protagonist said before be taken as fart? Also, the male protagonist has given up all his secrets. Why are the family not worried about whether the male protagonist will be injured in another world? They just keep asking for benefits. The poisonous weed has been abandoned. Goodbye.

What can I say, it looks weird to me, a bit stiff~

In ancient times, coarse salt was used, and fine salt was very expensive. Go to the modern world and look up how to purify it. But how to commit common crimes in ancient times?

Haven't watched it yet, was it hit by a Ferrari at the beginning? That Ferrari must be driven by a beautiful woman, it's like this in all the sexy and cool articles

It's just a chronicle novel, and the protagonist's role is to be the cheating grandfather of the whole family... Also, this chapter and the scene transitions feel very stiff and unsmooth no matter how I read it. It feels like drinking coffee in a coffee shop and fighting on the battlefield in Afghanistan...

One moment he said that he should be careful not to reveal his martial arts skills in modern times, and the next moment he taught it to two women who didn't want to do it. Let's run away now. Come on, author.

Raised for two months. I never expected it! You are such a slow author, there are already over 200 chapters. I just came out of Novice Village after looking at the catalog. Now I am very hesitant whether to kill or not.

What's the way to keep saying it can't be exposed, and then take a video and upload it? ? ? I don't quite understand this idea.

Good luck, I like this style of writing very much, and the story is also interesting. I will keep it with one ticket a day (sometimes I may forget it, so cheers to the author)

The thinking of ordinary people is too scary, I can't stand it anymore

I read Chapter 30 and the protagonist is still a weakling here, and a novice there who has never opened a map. He is not so slow in Slow Heat, right?

Recruiting extras! Although not many people have seen it, no matter whether anyone sees it or not, I will post a discussion here to recruit supporting actors. First of all, the supporting actor should have a name By the way, the background can also be simply made up, right? Finally, the story about this supporting actor can be interesting Anything that comes to mind can be written below the post When I see something new and interesting, I will sort it out and write it into a book Thank you for your support 🌹

After reading more than 20 chapters, it was all filled with water and slipped away.

It's too watery😰

The writing is okay, the content is close to daily life, and it easily arouses a sense of empathy. It feels like it was written by a 25-30 year old. Just slow to update

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but doesn't the male protagonist need to sleep when he travels back and forth between the two worlds?

Nice setting. It's a pity that the author didn't stick with it! !

Old routine. Can the author use some brains? If you robbed or smashed that Ferrari, that would still be interesting.

It's a bit messy to wear on both sides. . . .

Hurry up and update, the writing is actually very good, but the update is too slow.

I originally found it elsewhere, and that's enough to subscribe to, it looks great, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง! !

After reading the comments, I feel that some people's vicious words have made the author's mentality explode. It's a pity