This Marvel Is Weird

I said that although the male protagonist is now in the United States, please don't make all Kamen Riders Americans? Can you arrange a few people like Chinese or Japanese, Germans, French, and Russians?

The pace feels a bit slow, and there are many breakpoints between plot chapters. Think of poor continuity. The last chapter just had a small climax and created a point of suspense, and then skipped the other plots in the next chapter. For example, in the latest chapter, Peter Parker exposed himself to ask for help in the previous chapter, and jumped to another plot in the next chapter. The sense of suspense is enough to whet the reader's appetite, but this is a drama. If the plot of the next chapter is more exciting, it will be almost boring. Because my attention was completely attracted by the plot of the previous chapter, I was eager to know the follow-up plot.

It tastes good. And Kamen Rider is really idealistic, whether it's equipment or magic, it's all about the heart.

It's well written, but it's a little incoherent, and the knights switch a little quickly 😅

Dear author, your writing is very good and very attractive. Don't worry about some comments saying that you don't choose the familiar Marvel universe. It doesn't matter. I just came to see Knight anyway. It doesn't matter about Marvel. I don't care anyway. It's just that the pace is a bit fast. You can slow it down a little. Come on! ! !

Can't you write it as a knight? It's so confusing to watch. Sometimes I don't know who is who. Also, what sense of existence does the protagonist have? ? ?

It is well written and has the flavor of a knight. I would like to give you a suggestion. What readers think looks good may not always come out to show off. But those who are picky and picky always come out to show off. But this does not mean that there are fewer people who like it than people who dislike it. Those who dislike it are the truth. Sometimes authors have to stick to themselves and don't change things from left to right just to cater to bad reviews.

It's really good, it has the flavor of Kamen Rider. I don't know why I just can't stand some Kamen Rider stories.

Is it Amazon for Peter?

Speaking of which, after coming into contact with the Time Stone, you can try jumping to other world lines and summon Chonghuang through the collection of power seeds in different world lines. For example, go to the Marvel Zombie Universe to strengthen the zombie cassette of shrimp dumplings, evolve to the level of the universe chronicle, and try to do things.

Showa Knights is really not good enough except rx. Number 1 and number 2 were crushed to death by the old driver Formula (number 1 and number 2 were overwhelmingly defeated by number 3 in the theater version. Number 3 was not as good as number 4, and number 4 was fucked by formula).

Emmm There are many knights, but they are all other people and not the protagonists, and now they are eunuchs.

Friends, is the protagonist of your book Lu Ming, or is it the Marvel Heroes drama? The behind-the-scenes operations should also be written from the main point of view, it's a mess.

It's very well written, and it feels like Amazon.

The author is great, can you add more updates?

Captain America is a woman

I didn't expect to not write about the movie universe 😍 Come on