The Immortal Spirit Array That Travels Through Troubled Times

Is it fun to swipe votes? . Do you really think everyone else is a fool? 150,000 Words, no contract, 0 fans

I didn't understand what was written. Also, is it fun to brush comments and votes? Needless to say, this book is a must-read

A few chapters later, Goodfellas is all about dialogue? The expression of language is not literal. You are writing a novel and not drawing a comic. Readers are too lazy to imagine the scene where the protagonist is. Why don't you write it? The dialogues are also almost devoid of any emotion, and the entire story is almost the fault of the novice author. This is not how books are written.

It seems that there is a scene that is quite embarrassing.

Like, like, like, three likes in a row is enough to show how much I love this book.

There has been a book shortage recently, and I have been looking through it and can't find a novel I like. Many books seem to be carved out of a template, and I have read enough. I prefer to read fairy tales and fantasy novels. I accidentally turned to the book Immortal Spirit. After reading the first two chapters, I almost gave up. Fortunately, I persisted and found that the later chapters are really more and more exciting. The author's writing is getting better and better. It can be seen that this is a very thoughtful work. Come on, support you!

If only I could find such interesting novels every day

This book is good, does anyone else recommend similar books?

Recently I have been staying at home and reading novels.

Envy, when will I be able to write such a beautiful book?

I have prepared the starting coins and am ready to reward the author.

Voted! Come here every day.

Collect it, fatten it up and look good again

There are so many reviews for this new book

Not bad, not bad. It's the type I like to read. I just like this kind of novel.

This book is great! The recent plots have become more and more exciting. As a reward, I will give you all my recommendation votes. I hope the follow-up will be even more exciting! Author, we support you! I will read new updated chapters every day. I hope the author can update more so that I can continue to read them. I've been browsing through Qidian recently and found very few novels I like.

The writing is very good, but there are a few slightly unreasonable things. I suggest the author improve the details. You know, details determine success or failure. Really good novels are relatively complete in details. It can be seen that the author's writing style is still very good. If you keep writing, you will definitely get good results. I have already collected it and will read it again when the number of words increases. I hope the author will work hard to write it down. There are really few novels worth reading now, and there is always a book shortage.

Why are they all comments from writers? Any readers?