Fighting Against the World

The writing is pretty good, but the pace is a bit fast. More branch plots can be added. Overall it's fine.

The author's thinking is really childish, and he actually has sympathy for Xiao Yan. It's so damn childish. Someone else, Xiao Yan, traveled through time, and at least he went from hanging on silk to being single. The protagonist of this book is still hanging on silk. According to the author's thinking, he is not doing very well in reality. He is naive and does not fight for opportunities when there are opportunities, which is equivalent to not making money when opportunities arise.

Don't care, I feel like I'm on a trip

Anyway, I'm speechless. Brother, this fighter only arrived in his 20s. When he was 13 or 14 years old, he was the worst at the bottom. Oops, I haven't read the original work. Isn't he older than 17? However, when I was 14 years old, I was fighting as hard as I was when I was four years old. Oops, I was watching fake death. This kind of cooperation has long been seen in Dou Huang Dou Zun. When the poison first started, it made me very uncomfortable.

Author, it's not your fault that your writing is not good! But if the plot is bad, it's your fault.

I don't even know how to write it. There is no need to use resources if you are pressed. I've traveled through time and space, and I'm still a fucking loser. I don't even have a girlfriend. I don't even know what was written.

I don't know why you write fan fiction. Are you here to travel or to make money?

Good writing, keep it up 😁

This book is very good and beautiful 😄 The writing style is also good, I hope the author will work harder, 🥺

I guess the default female lead should be Zi Yan 😏🤭😁

Looking at the table of contents, Doupo wrote hundreds of chapters and the content was condensed by the author into just a few dozen chapters? In less than a hundred chapters, there will be a tomb in the sky. The span is large enough.

I am also convinced by this plot 😰

Don't you have a second part?

To have the ability to change, you have to go around in such a big circle.

I'm a bit of a rebel. I guess the author is also such a person.

This is the worst and most disgusting Dou Po fanfic I have ever read. It's fucking disgusting than seeing fighting spirit turning into a horse!