There Are Thousands of Feathers Born from Grass

1. Accept it. The writing style is light and natural, which is my favorite type. 2. Each short story is quite profound, but it lacks some memory points. Even if it is said to be profound, it is not profound at all. However... I strongly recommend "Disqualification in the World". I'll come and visit often in the future, haha. Come on! Expect every story, no matter how long or short, to be... An experience. It is a treasure, but it also has shortcomings. I hope it will be better and better when I come back to see it in the future... (*'▽'*)♪

I will record my feelings about reading the book in the future...

Come on, come on, it feels good

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Already invested, nineteenth.

It's pretty good, the details are well described, and there's a sense of ancient style. However, some of the descriptions of appearance could be less detailed. It would be more comfortable to reduce the number of words. The above personal opinions, great encouragement~

The writing is really good, and the plot is also very attractive. Anyway, it is very attractive to me 😜 I just have a small suggestion. Can you correct the typos after you finish writing? I am a little concerned 😠

1. Judging from the title of the book, it is not very good. It is a bit literary, but it does not have the elegance and fairy spirit of the female channel, nor the majestic atmosphere of the male channel. I am not a novice, so just looking at the title, I thought it was about youth love. The introduction persuades people to quit. The main characters, the heroine and the male lead, are released at the beginning, but it seems very messy. Although there are no spoilers, the pure love is obviously not interesting. 2. The writing is good and fluent. Pay attention to the punctuation, otherwise readers who look closely will feel a little uncomfortable. 3. The sudden transition to the past life memories seems abrupt, and the male lead's performance towards the female protagonist is inconsistent, which is a bit inconsistent with the current personality. The past life in the second chapter is inappropriate and appears to be particularly dramatic. 4. The language is humorous and not very old-fashioned, but the words are quite relaxed. It's just that I personally couldn't accept the beginning of the plot. Come on (✪▽✪)

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

The article was written too hastily. Even though I had the ending in mind, I still couldn't make the characters more fleshed out, and I couldn't be satisfied with it. So, from now on, I will start writing a fast-travel novel again, and I will start posting it after I finish it. Sorry to disappoint everyone. In addition, I would like to thank those who have always supported me. I will definitely work harder to write it before posting it ✌️🌹. Love readers, love life❤️

After reading the first three chapters carefully, I felt that the writing was very good, the reading was very visual, the paragraphs were very comfortable, and it was very easy to read. The plot is also very novel and a good article. The plot attracted me. I personally like this style of story. I really didn't find any bad points. Hahaha Come on~