Douluo Ser

Martial spirits are cells? It's interesting. Let's keep it for now.

The introduction is quite interesting, I hope it doesn't get too toxic.

Murderous aura, bloody clothes, bone weapons, can't find one 🔨

Damn it, you are so good at pigeons. For most of the year, I thought you were in the palace to serve the emperor.

In fact, in the original work, it seems that the master said that Wuhun Palace raped people. There are many unreasonable things here. 1. Forcibly pulling in geniuses will only bring in traitors, and no organization will do this. 2. If what he said is true, then Phoenix Man and Xiao Ao will definitely die. They don't have the same background as Tang San, and they also traveled to the mainland? Joke. 3. The master is a member of the family. Even if he doesn't want to go home, he still thinks about the family and not others. 4. You will not blatantly force someone to do it, which will only affect your credibility. Even if you want to kill, it will be secretly. After all, who knows who did it. Don't forget that family, nobles, and clans are also very important in killing other geniuses. After all, that's what his thinking was.

I read more than 70 chapters in one go. After reading it, I feel very good overall. Let me tell you my opinions first. First, the protagonist problem, because the protagonist has had a low sense of existence for a while. It will be confusing at the beginning and you can't tell who is the protagonist. But gradually you get used to it. Maybe the author will have a better solution to the protagonist's current schizophrenia (it looks like it, but I don't know what this situation is like). Second, there is the issue of female protagonists. Currently, there is no intention to have a female protagonist. I personally feel that no matter what kind of novel is written, there should still be a female protagonist, but it cannot be messed up. There are many types of people who fall in love with each other at one glance. In that case, it is better to read Xiaobai's novels directly. Synthesizing martial souls, there are too many martial souls. This depends on how the author solves the problem of the protagonist in the future. If the protagonist will be synthesized into one later, it will feel like there are too many martial souls. If it remains like this, it will feel like there is something wrong with the protagonist Fourth, combat power The problem is, fighting a titled Douluo with five rings. Although Dugubo is level 91, he feels that his combat power is too high. When he reaches six or seven rings, he will not be able to fight a god. The span of combat power is too big Fifth, transforming the martial spirit. I feel that this is a bit too abnormal. Before It's the same martial arts spirit (Zhu Zhuqing and Zhu Zhuxuan's part). After the transformation, they brutally tortured others. They have the same fourth ring, and the increase in combat power is a bit outrageous I personally feel that the writing of this article is very good, and there is nothing uncomfortable about it I don't want to comment too much on the writing. Although I have been reading novels for seven or eight years, I have never mentioned the problem of writing, because not everyone is good at writing at the beginning. It has to be practiced, and one day it will be good. The overall article is good, non-toxic, and some are slightly poisonous. You can start reading it

To be honest, this book satisfied all my fantasies about Douluo Continent's martial arts. After all, what attracted me at that time was all kinds of strange martial arts.

Why not popular🔥🔥🔥? It's obviously better than other Douluo fans! Is it true that everyone who reads fanfiction now has unique XP?

To be honest, the author really wrote this book very well, both in terms of imagination and emotional expression. However, the author's main problem is the writing style. The author has the plot, but the writing style is not good. It describes the feeling, but the description is not clear. The plot of the article has a vague feeling.

If you give up halfway on everything you do, what else can you do?