Rebirth in the Late Ming Dynasty

Brief comment: This is a historical novel with simple and unpretentious writing. The time traveler Zhou Yu wants to reverse the direction of history. Has he succeeded? Wait for the author's update. Book title: "Rebirth in the Late Ming Dynasty" Author: Stupid Head Keywords: history, fictional history Commentator: I am Baihe Qingyou Book review text: Name: "Rebirth in the Late Ming Dynasty", this is a historical text. The time traveler Zhou Yu travels to Datong, an important city in the second year of Chongzhen, and interprets a heart-stirring story. This name captures the theme, full marks. Opening: Chuezi writes very well, the beginning of a poem is very atmospheric. The wasted army outside the Great Wall Northern Shanxi dreamed of returning to the Ming Dynasty The Jurchen Mongolian border camp Li Chuang offered his loyalty and fought for the front China was bleeding and drifting The Chinese building will fall Want to use this body to change destiny Who cares if he leaves a name in history? Follows one dream after another. This chapter is very attractive and successful. The second chapter introduces the agriculturist and naturalist Song Yingxing. Zhou Yu made some efforts to attract his attention. In the end, the two talked in detail, and he met Song Yingxing again in later chapters. The conversations were all textbook-style explanations. The content was extensive, complex or complex, simple or simple. For college students, these contents are nothing, but many readers will find them boring. The writing is smooth and the narrative skills are profound. The plot was slow to pick up, and until I reached Chapter 21, the bandit suppression, which I had high hopes for, did not reach the climax I expected. Although there was a small twist in the middle, and the sudden appearance of the second master, there was no danger in the end. It is recommended that there be more descriptions here, more scene descriptions and psychological descriptions, to heighten the tense atmosphere. Summary: This is a historical text. It feels like you are reading the text, and you don't feel reluctant to put it down. In the early stage, the male protagonist is a small character. He not only needs to train soldiers, but also popularize corn cultivation. He also does business, successfully develops cement, opens factories, etc. In the later stage, when big events occur, it will be better to see some big people join in. Finally, I would like to give some suggestions to the author: 1. The conversation with Song Yingxing does not need to be too comprehensive, only one example should be vivid. The iron ball and gravity must be written in detail so that everyone can understand it, and it is easy for the ancients to understand it. It must be detailed and brief so that you will not feel tired. 2. The training process can be more detailed and have touching tears. This is the first brother army that Zhou Yu started. 3. The characterization of Zhou Yu's right-hand man should be more vivid and polished. Perhaps because each reader has different feelings, my feelings cannot represent all, and I have not read the major events in the later period, so I may be biased, please forgive me. The author works hard and strives to enter V as soon as possible.

Grab a sofa! The writing is very good! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

The author's thinking is clear and his writing is fluent. It can be seen that this is a story about industrial salvation of the country and the country. The recommended point is to divide it into good paragraphs. Readers will be very dissuaded when they see a long paragraph of text. Come on, author, welcome to visit again

I circled it a little bit and read it in preparation. I like the Ming Dynasty history article!

Write your own story and stick with it!

It's amazing, the writing style is seasoned, it doesn't feel like a newbie. Moreover, the plain and simple text can tell the story well, and occasionally some highlights and jokes are interspersed very naturally. It is very comfortable to watch, and it can be predicted in the first few chapters. Later, the protagonist will make a name for himself in the turbulent late Ming Dynasty, which will definitely be exciting. Overall, this is a historical novel with great potential. I would like to make some personal suggestions - The plot arrangement in the opening chapter is too loose. It neither directly intervenes in historical events nor puts the protagonist into crisis immediately. Moreover, things like working, teaching geometry, fortune telling, and saving people are all like independent copies with almost no connection, which makes readers lack the courage to read down. For example, I have read historical novels very early, and I can't remember the specific ones. To put it bluntly - one book starts out poor and miserable, and is looked down upon by others and dependent on his wife, so he studies hard for the imperial examination. This makes people want to see if the protagonist can change the status quo by being the top scholar in high school. Also, at the beginning, the city is besieged and is in danger, so fight back the enemy. Of course, no matter what, the writing is good. Are you interested in a long-term mutual review? Come on.