Henglian Is King

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After reading the latest chapters, the protagonist appeared, and the result gave me the feeling that the vampire is the real protagonist. A vampire who has killed countless innocent people, the protagonist has to rely on him and form a blood contract with him. If this vampire did not die tragically in the end, but cooperated with the protagonist, it would definitely be extremely poisonous.

I was confused after reading it and felt that after being caught and before being caught are two novels, like a spiritual revival novel turned into a western fantasy novel. I have no idea what the protagonist is doing.

Nowadays, novels are beginning to advocate the practice of horizontal training. The protagonists in such novels are all reckless men. Generally, when something happens, they just say "go" and "reckless" is over.

I'm so impressed... I don't know how many chapters the protagonist's name doesn't even appear. Even if it is written in two lines, it is okay. It has tens of thousands of words of foreshadowing and does not include the protagonist. One of the taboos in writing novels is that there are only supporting characters and no protagonists in the novel, which makes people upset and makes them not in the mood to continue reading no matter what the foreshadowing is. Novel such as "Feng Huo Opera" and "Jian Lai" written by princes are full of foreshadowing. The foreshadowing and the main line are narrated in two lines. The last two lines are perfectly intertwined at the right time, detonating all the hidden foreshadowing and making people amazed after watching it. But for a small and medium-sized plot of only tens of thousands of words, which does not even affect the protagonist's life path, personality changes, and psychological growth, you arrange this kind of super long and boring foreshadowing that does not give the protagonist any shots. It is really annoying and makes me just want to fast forward.

Author: This golden finger is not like a golden finger. You can't add more points.

The effects of each level of the exercise should also be described.

This book is okay! Even old bookworms can't stop reading! Come on

The story is so compact that it never ends. There are also some plug-ins. After my wife has improved, she doesn't need to practice. She just needs to sleep on the hydraulic machine as a bed. She will be invincible after sleeping under the Star Destroyer Cannon. Why write so much?

I have to spray it. The Golden Bell Pig's trotter has only been cultivated to the first level. The author directly forced the pig's trotter to become invincible? I'm a Spartan too! What to do with the golden bell in other novels? If the pig's trotters are trained to the seventh or eighth level, forget it! If the first level is so awesome, then does the second level become the Creator?

The realm level setting is too exaggerated. It starts to blow up at the first level. This is boring and the reading experience is extremely poor.

What is it? Do you want to write so many garbage chapters?

It's too messy, the front and back don't line up, the bull's head doesn't match the horse's mouth. That's what the recruitment card is. What's the matter with the sudden appearance of the rank of captain, and what's the point of recruiting you as an ordinary person when you appear to be an ordinary person?

Your realm division is too vague, just use the first level or the first layer of the golden bell.

The first 50 chapters were well written, but when it came to vampires, was it a failure? It's a messy batch. If you can't write Western weird stuff well, you won't write it. There's only so much stuff. The unique diversity of our culture is enough to write about, especially the evil with desire as the core, which is even more bizarre.

I've seen Chapter 32! Very well written! Isn't the writing behind it bad? The author writes well! The front is ok!

In a world where warriors are rampant, how much cultivation does the police profession require?

In more than thirty chapters, the golden bell has not been upgraded after being cleared n times. This is just a skill, Miao