After Traveling Through the Books, He Became the Protagonist's Villainous Brother-In-Law

The dignified General Zhenbei's Mansion doesn't have a single practitioner under his command? Those who protect the young master are all ordinary people. A big shot in the world of cultivating immortals would have died hundreds of times if he had not been around.

I felt very uncomfortable watching it. I couldn't understand the meaning of many sentences and there were too many typos.

This protagonist is like a dog, no wonder the book is not popular

Another loser protagonist, give up

The writing is good, but I think the protagonist is a bit aggrieved. His wife doesn't even recognize you. It's too aggrieved. He's still a villain. A very aggrieved villain.

The plot is a mess, no wonder the results are so bad! At least you don't arrange the plot randomly. A chapter was just in this plot, and suddenly it jumped to that plot again!

But I am thinking about a question, where is the group number?

It's rare, finally someone has synchronized it!

Forgive me, the author, maybe I like refreshing articles, but you, this lady, feel uncomfortable when I see them apart. One thing to say, as an old bookworm, this book is really well written, so you should read it. I just don't know when the heroine, the saint, will come back!

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

The plot is a mess, the writing is poor, and the supporting characters are clueless.

Just reading the introduction makes me want to squirt. Licking Master, a good person should not be a good person. He has to be a dog. I laughed.

I think this is great, you should keep up the good work and make more updates😊

But you still need to make some more modifications, which makes me a little sad!

When I saw Chapter 16, the heroine unlocked the seal and unleashed her cultivation to go on a killing spree, I couldn't help it. The heroine was able to unlock the seal but was actually raped by the protagonist who had no cultivation in the first chapter. You say it's outrageous or not. The key point is that the heroine is still a saint. Doesn't the saint even have a protector around her? ? ? ?

What is the realm? I looked a little confused. Give specific data

Come on, I think your writing is very good, please continue to work on it 😁