Fix the World

Hey (◉ω◉ ), the two people on the fan list are actually acquaintances٩( 'ω' )و 1. The introduction is quite interesting, but. 2. The white ferret at the beginning is quite attractive and can be regarded as a small climax, but after the white ferret, it becomes... Too bland and cannot catch the eye. 3. The writing can be smooth, the length is clean, and the senses are acceptable. Come on

Brief comment: Planting trees and building villages on barren hills is simple, thought-provoking and noble in essence. Book title: "Repair the World" Author: Mingyue Dantianxia Keywords: Fairy Tales, non-rebirth, non-travelling, no golden fingers Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Book review text: Name: "Repair the World", this is a world of cultivating immortals and cultivating the truth. The essence of cultivation is to swallow the essence of heaven and earth, and to kill all the birds and beasts, elixirs and herbs. This world is already broken and incomplete, its spiritual veins are missing, and it is close to the end of the Dharma Age. But the Yunhu Sect was kind to mortals and planted trees to green the desert. This name captures the theme, full marks. Opening: The first section of the alien beast is a white ferret. After being caught stealing a spiritual bead, he bowed and bowed. He looked aggrieved and had big tears rolling down his face. The female protagonist felt pity and wanted to save her. Fortunately, the elder was decisive and killed it immediately. The heroine almost caused a catastrophe and caused the death of her family. The beginning is peaceful, then the white mink is vividly described, and then the cruelty of the world is unfolded. There is no earth-shattering event, but it is another kind of enjoyment in the gentle breeze. Character setting: The heroine Lin Yuemue has a not very distinctive personality. No male protagonist has appeared yet. The villain, Ni Tian Xianjun, is very successful in portraying him. All characters are highlighted from the side, with distinctive and ruthless personalities. There are very few descriptions of the appearance of the characters. The heroine and the junior sister appeared first. I don't know what they look like. The only explanation is that the junior sister is short. Later, two elders appeared. The only difference is that the color of their faces is different. One elder looks like an old man, and the other has a brown face. On the contrary, a lot of pen and ink was spent explaining some of the spiritual beads, as well as the strange beasts that appeared, and the big rooster that appeared in the fifth section is more interesting, "stretching its neck to wake up, arrogant", the monster leopard is better described, "turning his eyes, tears in his eyes". Writing style: There are some inappropriate words in the first section, but it gets better and better later on. "The green bamboo sea is swaying in the wind, a small courtyard, a few cups of fragrant tea, everyone is sitting on the ground, and the elders are speaking with sincerity." It is beautiful, very sentimental, and it is the kind of clear writing. The plot is compact and always reaches a peak when you get tired of watching it. The author is particularly good at describing small animals. Suggestion: Nowadays, novels are accustomed to use one chapter and two chapters. This book uses one section and two sections, which is a bit unfamiliar. Summary: This book has no rebirth, no time travel, no golden fingers, and no space. It does have teachers who are generous and kind, and classmates who love each other. It is worth reading.

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This book is so well written, with a compact plot, delicate writing, vivid characterization, and distinct personalities of each character. I believe I will be the next platinum writer😁

This book is well written, a platinum writer, highly recommended by fellow readers.

Thank you little cutie, I saved it, I will add another little fan to you! Come on, come on!

Very well written, bookmarked! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

Quite interesting! Collected! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

I actually became a monthly ticket financier, and I felt awesome instantly, hahaha

The writing is pretty good. I would like to make a small suggestion. No paragraph is too long. Nowadays, novels are read on mobile phones. If it is too long, I will feel tired. I have invested in it. Come on＾0＾~

So is this a fairy tale about farming? It feels so fun😌

Catching up with the first order, hey, luckily it's not too late