There Is an Island in the Portable Divine Spring

Memoirs of an Ex-Girlfriend: Two women competing for a man's favor? What if they are all girlfriends? Wouldn't it be better for you to go to a female channel?

My story with the three huskies I raised in Qiandao Lake and my ex-girlfriends living in my memories...

There is a problem with the narrative. There are various memoirs of ex-girlfriends throughout the whole article, and then one, two, three are analyzed. Is this saying that the protagonist is handsome? Is there nothing else to write about except ex-girlfriend? He even wrote less about his parents and sister, so there are no interesting things to write about? No friends?

It's poisonous. It's always my ex-girlfriend, so I won't write anything else.

Suddenly I found that skipping the paragraph about my ex-girlfriend didn't affect my reading and it even became smoother.

Brother, write less emotional scenes, it will be embarrassing😓

This is a pretty girl raised by a rich woman, Tom, Marilyn and Mona Sui who can charm even old men. Why doesn't your girlfriend, who spent half a million dollars on you in three years, marry you? Brother, have you ever seen any teacher who can support a pretty boy with half a million?

I quite like this type of novel, but I really hate Erha, so I quit.

The cool night makes me miss you like a river.

Well, what is written in the new chapter makes me support Zheng Baiju as the heroine now?

I felt very sissy while listening to the book, and I kept talking about my ex-girlfriend

Author, please change the title of the book, just call it "The Shura Field of My Ex-Girlfriends and Me"

Saw the latest chapter. I feel like the writing is a bit pretentious. These recent chapters are all about "Teacher Zhao". Does the author also encounter the same problem? A little watery.

Poisonous? I recall my ex-girlfriend almost chapter by chapter, and it would be half a chapter, or the whole chapter, if you were too wet like this. I don't know what the author was thinking, but I felt disgusted, and it was just for self-pleasure, and I was speechless. . . .

I gave up the book and read 94 chapters. In summary, 70 chapters are about two ex-girlfriends.

It's boring and too watery, 80% of it is written as a memoir of an ex-girlfriend. Excluding the 15% of live communication and the narcissism of the protagonist, only 5% is the main text. There are also three Erha who have not changed even after drinking the divine spring water. This is the wateriest novel I have ever read.

Author, I seriously doubt that you are the one who is a softie. Think about it, who would write a memoir of an ex-girlfriend in dozens of chapters in a novel and accept half a million yuan? It is simply unbelievable. If you miss this plot, you will miss it. If you want to repay, write a reward. After all, the former waste, the ex-girlfriend who was such a good person has been ruined and the good feelings have become exes. Why does the protagonist still have the nerve to mention it? I don't understand.

Erha leaves the factory, you can play with it yourself.