Tang Qian

You should write officialdom novels, which are also consistent with your identity

Not a single masterpiece of the great god has been left behind...

I heard that the author is the mayor, so I came here to watch.

Hey, I feel like I know everything the author wants to write, it's an old routine 😳

I have read almost all of the author's works, and my first feeling is that it is a pity. The author has rich life experiences and strong writing skills. What he writes is completely unmatched by novice authors, especially when he writes about officialdom, history, shopping malls, and society. This is the biggest reason why I like the author. But the author's problem is also huge. Mature characters have been writing very childish and similar stories, which is the most regrettable thing. The author's stories are usually exciting in the early stages, with ups and downs, and suspense, but gradually become dull in the middle stage. The protagonist almost never has any major setbacks and reaches the peak of his life. Many of the wonderful supporting characters at the beginning have no follow-up stories. According to the official doctor, the protagonist's father was shunned by the local leader Hou Senlin because he was unwilling to frame the old leader. His mother went to Beijing to file a lawsuit and died in a car accident. His father later committed suicide, and the protagonist's family has been devastated since then. The protagonist is lucky enough to travel back to the point before his father was Shuanggui. With the mission of saving his family, he fights wits and courage with the evil forces. During this period, he gets acquainted with Tang Xiaolan, a key player in the whirlpool of the incident. After winning her trust, they worked together to report Hou Senlin successfully, which not only changed the fate of the family, but also captured the heart of the beauty and started a business with her. The story written up to this point is very excellent and gripping, especially the descriptions of many supporting characters, which are rich and excellent, and vividly outline the world of the novel. It can be said that up to this point, it is definitely an excellent novel. But then the story gradually became boring. The protagonist had no setbacks, and didn't even have a decent negative boss. He kept getting rich and became a high official. One after another beautiful women inexplicably threw themselves into his arms, and rode a rocket to the top of his life. This kind of story is completely nutritious, not even enjoyable, and ruins the wonderful stories and characters that came before. The hard-working, down-to-earth and responsible male protagonist has become a playboy. Tang Xiaolan, who is self-reliant and self-reliant, soft on the outside but strong on the inside, able to emerge from the mud without getting stained, has become a model mistress. The reader does not care that the protagonist has trillions of wealth, such empty numbers are meaningless. What readers want to see is the satisfaction of overcoming many difficulties, first bitter and then sweet. Readers are not interested in beauties whose descriptions are rough and lack personality and reality. No matter how many male protagonists there are, they cannot feel happiness. I would like to give the author a few comments from a reader's perspective: The author needs to set more setbacks and failures, losses and pains for the protagonist, not only at the beginning, but along with each stage of growth, so that the story can be exciting and interesting, and the success after each setback can be more real and satisfying. Without real failures and setbacks, readers will not feel happy. The author has experience in character description. Many supporting characters and minor characters are vividly written and very close to reality. This is due to the author's rich life experience, but the description of the protagonist is not satisfactory. The male protagonists described by the author are all too mature and perfect, with serious similarities and no "flaws" that they should have. The protagonist should certainly have advantages that make readers like him, but without faults, there would be no reality and characteristics. The author can give the protagonist some real and acceptable flaws. For example, Luo Zhiyuan, an official doctor, can be foresighted, mature and steady, but he can also inherit his father's arrogance and stubbornness of being unwilling to compromise with reality. This shortcoming will naturally lead to certain disasters and create new plots. The plot driven by this kind of character is more reasonable. The author once said that he is not good at writing about women. In fact, to be more precise, I am not good at writing about love. As long as the woman is not the protagonist, you write well, especially the middle-aged woman. The author most likely doesn't understand the psychology of why women fall in love with men. All the women who play the protagonist lose their minds and fall in love with him for no apparent reason after meeting him. But the author is not without success in describing love. It is very reasonable for Tang Xiaolan to fall in love with Luo Zhiyuan. Tang Xiaolan, as a young and beautiful entrepreneur who has been surrounded by scandalous news, is smart and capable and works hard to start a business, but she has always been unfairly despised and rumored by others, as well as coveted by powerful men. After some investigation and contact, the male protagonist discovered that Tang Xiaolan was actually a self-reliant and self-loving woman and a victim of the incident, so he decided to help her and after going through some adventures with her, he brought down the mastermind behind the scenes. It is very reasonable for Tang Xiaolan to fall in love with Luo Zhiyuan. Because Luo Zhiyuan is the first man who understands and respects her and truly wants to help her without possessing her for the purpose. In comparison, it is very unreasonable for the male protagonist's official wife Xie Wanting to fall in love with the male protagonist, and there is no reason for the male protagonist to fall in love with her. Xie Wanting's description is not vivid enough, her face is vague, and she lacks personality. Apart from matching her life experience and allowing the protagonist to enter the upper class, there is no reason for her to be the heroine. Authors always like to make women with the noblest background but poor writing skills the leading role. In fact, this is a big misunderstanding. Reality is different from novels. The male protagonist can completely rely on his personal ability to rise. Readers do not care about the background of the female protagonist and whether she matches the male protagonist. What matters is whether the female protagonist is beautiful, vivid and real, and whether there is anything precious in her personality that is worthy of the male protagonist's love. I suggest that the author should use his strengths and avoid weaknesses when writing about love. If he is not good at writing about love, he should not open a harem randomly. Not only will he fail to satisfy readers, but he will also waste the few women who have written well. Which woman writes well and has reasonable emotions, she should write this one carefully. It is better to be less greedy and focus on the story. The story has no purpose. Although online novels do not need to have a far-reaching conception, the conception can give the story a framework and give it a beginning and an end. Without a purpose, the story can only continue aimlessly without knowing where it will end. The author's main problems are these three: The story develops too smoothly and lacks a real climax and turning point; The male protagonist is too perfect and lacks personality; The author's writing skills and rich knowledge have the opportunity to write excellent works, similar to "Chief No. 2", But the author seems to be too rigid in following the Internet writing routine, wasting his writing skills, which is a pity.

I haven't read it for a long time. Why can't I find the book "High Official"? I read it in physical form before.

How come such a good book is full of eunuchs? I feel like the author can compete with the high-sounding ones if he writes more.

Come and watch, boss 😰