Starting from Douluo and Signing into the Eye of Reincarnation

This book is very good, but Qian Xunji shouldn't be able to cripple him here. He should be repaired and given a beating by his father before being crippled. Yes, that's it. If you bully me, you will definitely be crippled!

Come on, I will vote for you, stop being a eunuch

This book is a slow-burning type, because Tang San has not yet been born, so the plot development is very difficult. Starting from Chapter 30, the plot begins to develop rapidly, with the fight against Qianxunji and the recruitment of Qiandaoliu. Then contact the six major sects. In the later stage, there will be a battle with Wuhun Palace and two empires. The ten most ferocious beasts, etc... Finally, he will go to the God Realm to seize the throne of God! … The plot develops a bit slowly, so please forgive me, all handsome readers! Add it to your favorites and vote more~ The plot behind will not disappoint you! ! !

The routine is somewhat similar to a slap in the face essay. The key is that this routine of humiliating the male protagonist and then slapping him in the face is really a long time coming. This kind of humiliation and then slap in the face really makes all the supporting characters except the male protagonist have intellectual problems. . . Who would offend someone for no reason and then humiliate them? Absolutely. I felt really uncomfortable watching it. Not many people read this kind of nonsensical slap-in-the-face article. The author should try to improve his writing skills. And can we not always write characters who are mentally retarded passers-by except for the male protagonist? Why are they all rushing like this? Who did the male protagonist provoke? It has to be written in a plot where the male protagonist will be humiliated. It's enough once or twice, and every time a passerby or important character appears, the male protagonist has to be humiliated. Ah, there is no one else here. Is the male protagonist a collection of hatred? Is everyone going to come up and ridicule the male protagonist? This looks really tiring. If you have this time, spend your energy on polishing the plot. Absolutely. You will never improve your writing skills by writing like this. Improving your writing skills and writing novels are essentially the same thing. No one can write a masterpiece as soon as it is written. Writing takes time and more effort to polish. But how can we improve if we try hard to write well but don't practice writing? It's better to write less slap-in-the-face routines. The book powder will make you feel tired and it will not help your writing very much. Unintelligent writing that lowers IQ will make the character in the text appear mentally retarded. This is really putting the cart before the horse. This comment may make you feel uncomfortable. After all, I didn't say a good word. Damn, criticism. It's inevitable to hear bad things. Delete it if you like. It's not my business anymore. Firstly, I don't troll anyone, secondly, I don't have a rhythm, and thirdly, I don't have any weirdness. I really wrote my criticism very sincerely. Whether you understand it or not is up to the author. Since you wrote this book, you must have worked hard. But since you want to write this book well. Take my advice and write less slap-in-the-face articles. This will take you to the point of no return. Real. Nowadays, none of the authors who wrote about slap-in-the-face routines have any new books. Some of their authors have greatly changed their writing styles when they publish new books. They themselves feel the pain. What about you? I hope the author can gradually improve his writing. I withdrew first. 🙏

I read more than ten chapters, Holy Mother + fw

The protagonist has not practiced anything, has no energy, and has no limit to the reincarnation eye? I vomited. You are really awesome. You should be more rigorous and use physical strength? That's not right, it's really about unlimited physical strength and unlimited vitality, just use your skills.

The main character, the Virgin. That's pretty much it.

I'm a little speechless, too much of a pretense.

Douluo and Hokage are all rubbish! Are you dissatisfied?

Holy mother bitch, the poison test failed and you slipped away.

Although I didn't read it, the introduction page made me look like an ignorant idiot, which made me laugh to death, alas! This little guy fills in the blanks.

I feel like the protagonist is like a country bumpkin, but after all he is a capable person. If he doesn't pretend, why are he hiding all the time? If he can't be beaten, it's not like he can't run away. It feels so poisonous.

The first 30 pictures are all fucking nonsense. Why write so much nonsense?

I have tasted hundreds of poisons and thought that they were immune to all poisons. Who knew that this book was so poisonous that my liver and intestines were broken. I will post here: Shennong is dead, and I will burn paper if I have something to do. Those who dig graves are not afraid of poison, so just dig them.

The author gives you a small suggestion: It's still okay now. After all, it's just the beginning. It's understandable that Bibi Dong doesn't like the male protagonist, but don't always be a licking dog. There is no future in being a licking dog. Most of your book friends are fantasy readers. I saw a movie that licked to the ending before!

The writing is immature, and the protagonist's desires are too exposed, like a gangster. The plot development relies entirely on pretending to slap people in the face and fighting. The author still needs to work harder.

It's written like Tuo Xiang, the protagonist has a problem even if he has the highest setting, but he can't kill soul beasts in Douluo Continent? Conscience discovery? Are you sorry for being human? The soul beast is reluctant to kill? You have been able to endure being provoked over and over again. Are you preparing to become a Buddha?

After the poison test is completed, burn the paper for me this time next year.

What a wonderful thing to write! It's a mess, it's too messy, the writing is very poor, and the protagonist is close to invincible at the beginning, so why should he experience life as a beggar?

I finally know how the protagonist quickly completed the first task, that is, the protagonist put Bibi Dong to sleep first.

The peak of Dou Yi's combat power: Poseidon Tang San, Rakshasa God Bibi Dong, Angel God Qian Renxue Achievements: In the finale of the fight between the three gods, there were actually a bunch of soy sauce people watching the battle. It was no problem at all. This combat power was too strong (and the Poseidon Trident, after Tang San exerted it with all his strength, smashed Bibi Dong half to death with only a million kilograms of power. This Rakshasa God is so strong ) Performance of the Rinnegan Eye's peak ability: Uchiha Madara's 300-meter-tall Susan with a sword draw cleared the surrounding map instantly, while Rokudo's Susan was 1,000 meters tall, and also brought his own artifact, the Seven-Star Sword. The Ten-Tails can wipe a country off the map with one strike of an ordinary tailed beast jade, while Rokudou's Susan can slash the ten-tailed beast's jade.

Can you slap me in the face less? A junior dared to hit him. Think about it, how could it be possible for Jia Zhu to talk in front of that Empress Chu Tian every day? Or should I say he is blind? Slap him in the face less and be more sincere.

666 Experienced decades ago

I haven't watched it yet. It is said that the Samsara Eye is powerful, but can the body really withstand it in the early stage? And can the Samsara Eye be comparable to Peerless Douluo... (Keep it up)

The Samsara Eye with only three skills can be called a Peerless Douluo, how much do you think highly of Naruto? If the reincarnation eye has all the abilities, it may be comparable to Peerless Douluo. Only three skills still give chakra to the protagonist. He uses Nagato in the original work because he lacks chakra to overdraw his vitality.

The author updates, and I'll give you the monthly pass

As long as we kill Qian Xunji and save Bibi Dong, we will be good friends

Free whoring 10. Zhang had no choice but to run away first