No Way, I Still Have a Fiancée

Let's talk about the introduction first The introduction is like an outline for most of the book. It has almost covered the core content of the book (which should be the discussion of good and evil). If this book had been opened earlier, it might have been interesting, but now I feel that it is no longer very attractive. Because many people have already written about this. So who will read it? So it has the opposite effect, that is, it not only tells your readers that there is nothing interesting about your book, but also tells the readers that I have not carefully conceived the content of this book at all. I have only read the first two chapters, so I will only discuss these two chapters. The first chapter writes about college life, clearly describing how decadent the protagonist is. It can be said that the negative energy is almost overflowing. Okay, look at the title and then the name of this book. The next plot development is not unexpected at all. After talking about the plot, let's talk about the writing style. The writing style is neither distinctive nor very attractive. Now it seems that your articles are relatively routine. No one will read a book that is both routine and poorly written. I suggest that you usually write some short films or some fragments, not too fast, mainly to practice your writing skills, and then after you finish writing, ask people around you to make corrections to see where there are any shortcomings. If you really can't come up with a good plot or a good world, you can only work on your writing. Of course this is just a suggestion from me. There is also the heroine. When I watched it, I felt that he was not very distinctive. Most of the heroines looked like this, which did not leave a deep impression on me. But this is just the beginning that I watched, but to be honest, this beginning made me no longer want to read any more. Keep up the good work!

I haven't read the content of the introduction to persuade people to quit. Reading the introduction, it looks like a poorly written routine article that is no longer popular.

You update too quickly. How can you live without recommendations from the new book list?

Check the card, ****! I'm done scolding you now

It's all like this. I'm also in the process of getting used to no one watching and accepting the reality. Let's get through it together. Come on.

Come on, come on 🌹

I want to scold you (‵□′): Come on ٩(๑´3｀๑)۶

To be honest, I didn't know why I was in a bad mood while watching it, but sometimes I felt like I was the male protagonist in love, which was awesome ❤️❤️ But it still felt like something was missing, it didn't feel like an urban novel, it felt like pure immortality

The main reason is that the subject matter is not attractive. Look at the introduction. What the hell is a loser boy? The genius girl is very unrelatable. In reality, she is just an ordinary person and has nothing to do with losers. This kind of YY writing has long ceased to be popular. It's normal that no one will read it.

The title of the book is quite interesting, but the introduction is a bit confusing and a bit discouraging. Thank you very much.

Come on, big brother, you are not a single player, you are always like this at the beginning, take your time 😊

Don't complain! Let's stick to the work ourselves! Of course there will be people who like it! Just getting started! It's a process that requires accumulation, come on! Collected! Welcome to visit us again!

When will the contract be signed? The update is too fast, right?

Come on, it's my first time writing a book, and it's already pretty good. Although some of the twists are a bit abrupt, overall it's much better than some other books. Personally, I feel that the heroine's emotional changes are a bit too fast. Maybe it's because I don't understand women very well, hahahaha. 😁

Come on come on! Work hard together😁

Save more manuscripts, just two to three chapters a day. Don't use too many. If there are too many, you will easily get stuck later.