Cultivation Has a Chip

Either be a pure aborigine and don't make a mess, or come from a time travel. The most taboo thing is your lack of clarity. The first few pages on my phone made me lose the desire to read any more. The first few hundred words are so important. Don't use them to explain how the plug-in came about. Wouldn't it be nice to write some specific conflicts to catch people's attention? Maybe some people criticize me for not reading carefully, hey, everyone is pressed for time, why can't I write more clearly? In addition, persistence is good, but if you persist on the wrong path, you might as well lie down and sleep, and you still have to make changes.

It feels like fantasy, wizard or something like that

I read five chapters 7.4/10 The system of cultivating immortals flows haha The writing is natural and smooth The storyline conforms to the system routines The readability can be rated 8 points. Even I, who rarely watch male videos and the system, can read it Let me be picky~ The male protagonist's name is a bit modern and I thought he was from time travel at first Part of the voice description makes me feel confused Discomfort (this can be ignored, after all, the target reader is not me haha After reading the first five chapters, I feel that the protagonist is going to rebel Generally speaking, it is to talk about the emperor's injustice and let the world defeat him At present, there is no procedural justice haha Or the protagonist is not a positive person in the orthodox sense It is also said by a generation of heroes In short, it is great and I will invest next month

If this book wasn't filled with too many words, the plot would still be pretty good.

The writing is really good. The most important thing is that although the data is not good, the author still persists. It is obvious that the author is not the kind of person who just cares about the data if he is not satisfied with it. He really uses love to generate electricity. Please subscribe and vote to encourage him.

As an old bookworm, I discovered the problem at the beginning. Time travel is a chip time travel, and the protagonist is local. I remember that the Witcher was also in this mode and the results were average... No sense of immersion. Secondly, the chip is too active and the protagonist becomes a tool. It can be said that there is almost no sense of experience.

It would be better if the protagonist was a person from Earth who traveled through time, so that the tone would appear natural and avoid some poisonous points

In fact, chip flow experts should start with elixirs, formations, and talismans!

It's very subtle

After reading a few chapters, this book is ruined by the system's excessive bullshit.

This book is actually a wizard-style novel, although the author tried his best to deny it. First of all, from the plot point of view, the disputes in the book are naked, without a trace of Eastern subtlety, straight to the point, with a strong Western style. Secondly, from the place names, isn't it better to call Tianfang Continent and Subcontinent a state? A middle-aged man in gray robes was sent by the Immortal Cultivation Sect to recruit disciples. He was powerful but lonely and silent. He was a strong Western style. What was the name of the disciples recruited by the Immortal Sect? They were called new blood. Do immortal cultivators have such a name? Looking further back, there were wolf thieves and robbers on the way to the Immortal Gate. Are you familiar? The new blood of the wizard academy was robbed on the way to the entrance. There is no need to read the following. The author's introduction repeatedly emphasized that it is not a wizard novel. I read the book with great trust. This is the result. It can only be that the person is really good at playing. The author is playing a prank with everyone. Say goodbye and go play alone.

This is more subtle

The protagonist's personality is not as distinctive as that of Chip, and it feels very selfish and has no sense of right and wrong. The plot lacks obvious excitement. I've read more than 200 chapters, so I'll give it a try.

See Chapter 10 and summarize. You can still read this book without thinking. I haven't read that wizarding book that other people are flooding the screen with. Just review the author's book. The man in gray robe created a very mysterious and powerful appearance in the first three chapters, but he turned out to be just a weakling who was able to recruit disciples from major dynasties purely by luck. The hostile forces sent so many people to sacrifice their lives just to intercept and kill this batch of fresh blood who was about to join, which shows that even for the major immortal sects, fresh blood is still very important (year-round fighting will definitely not work without fresh blood). But since new blood is so important, why is a weak war slave (the man in gray robe) assigned to recruit them? When a wolf bandit came to kill him, he had to wait until most of them were dead before taking action. As a result, he was almost beaten to death by a stronger enemy within 3 seconds. No one can be defeated along the way, not even any wild beast in the jungle. Finally, a man in a green shirt came and led the new team forward. This is very contradictory! ! ! New blood is important, but it doesn't seem to be taken seriously at all. Along the way, the men in gray robes and green shirts all had dead faces. They looked down upon everyone else and kept them away from strangers. The diaphragm should be seen

A wizard-style novel wrapped in the shell of cultivating immortals. . .

Change the name to "Chip's Legend of Cultivation of Immortality". Chip is the protagonist, controlling the natives to cultivate immortality.

Finally I read another book called Chip Goldfinger. I really like the chip article.

Your description is beyond my imagination!

Science is nothing compared to immortals, but it is still scientific to cultivate immortals

I don't think there's anything big about it, I just don't feel happy after watching it. It's a pity.

Why does it feel like a wizard

I was careless. I thought there were no double monthly passes, but I gave them six at once. I should have given it again on the 30th. I lost money 😂😂 It makes me sad to think about it 😂

After reading a few chapters, I couldn't stand it. When I saw the chip, I thought it was science plus fantasy, but the result is still pure fantasy. A chip can obtain the data of the current time and space at once (normal people's essence and skills that the protagonist doesn't know, and then improve the skills are so bad. Improvement is nothing, just give the protagonist the most powerful one). It is completely a system text. What is a chip called?

I was also disgusted by the Noble's start being hammered. If you wrote this loser's start as a genius and a low-key dog's development, the book would be much better. How can anyone who is a loser not keep a low profile and be a little transparent? Wouldn't it be good to develop with cheats? I have to run to die.

How should I put it? I think it was very poisonous from the beginning, okay? From the beginning, I got involved with those big shots. No matter how small a person is, it is unlikely that he will be related to a big person. Unless it's for show.

I don't like parody

Poison, poison, poison, it was fine in the first place, but when I went to the Ding family to track down An Zi, I started to use poison constantly. The poisonous cloud fills the air and lasts for dozens of chapters.

Nt ideas, idiot plot, strong explanation 😅

As everyone knows, cultivating immortality relies on breathing methods, so hahahahaha

Huawei's navy has come to Qidian. . .