Become a Descendant of Bai Qi in the Beginning of Great Qin

Very well written, I like to read it

Why does the protagonist help Han Fei to rectify Korea?

Why is it called Bai Ze? How can it not be called Bai Gei?

I'm sorry for all readers. My grandfather passed away at home and I have no intention to write. The author lives in a rural area and needs to pay homage to his family. Many things take a long time and may not be updated for a few days. I hope you can bear with me.

Hello everyone, I may be writing this book slowly, but I can still do it once a day. Writing fan fiction well is difficult. I don't want to write mindless articles.

Yes, it's well written. If you invest, the eunuch will strangle you to death 🥵

A small respect

Yan Lingji sent her greetings to the eighteenth generation of the traveler ancestors in her heart. Why would no traveler let her go?

This is written in the third chapter His entry into South Korea was so high-profile, just to let people in Xinzheng know that he was coming. When they first entered the city, the officers of Huben Camp discovered that the convoy was being followed, but they did not know who was following Bai Ze and his party for various purposes. Net, night, quicksand. The chess game has been decided. Who is the chess piece and who is the player? "An intoxicating smile appeared on Bai Ze's face. If there was a little girl around, I don't know how he would be fascinated. "This place is still too small, and there are too many people to see it. It seems that we need to change the place. Bai Ze and his party have more than a hundred people, and their target in Xinzheng City is too big. My group and I are in urgent need of a place that is large enough and secluded enough. Although Bai Ze is not afraid of being missed by interested people, it is always better to have less trouble. Isn't this written inconsistently? It's so embarrassing to watch

Baize all day long, watching Baize is quite disturbing. There is at least one Baize for every paragraph of Xiaoluo, and at least 40 Baize for a chapter of novel. Author, do you feel sick when you write like this? Can you continue to read it after you finish writing it? There is no need for the main character's name to appear so frequently. Moreover, the novel is quite good. The writing is too protracted. It would be better to just mention some insignificant things. Author, you also spend a few chapters to describe it in detail. The word count is too low.

The title is Chaos at the beginning. During the Warring States Period, not just anyone could be called Young Master. Only the king's son could be called Young Master. Do you understand? If anyone dares to call you a master, it is treason. You already want to be a master, how can others keep you? Look at Young Master Fusu, Ninth Young Master Han Fei, etc. The young masters at this time are not the young masters in the Tang and Song Dynasties. Do you understand that these two young masters do not represent the same meaning? Writing novels with fictional history should at least comply with the culture of this era. During the Warring States Period, a prince was the same as the princes and princes behind him.

When writing about the Mingyue of the Qin Dynasty, the word Bai Qi should not appear. You should know what Bai Qi is. Since you are a descendant of Bai Qi, you should have the art of war written by Bai Qi, and it should focus on war. Why are you setting up a main body of the world? Do you want to say that the descendants of a generation of strategists are wandering in the world.

Don't make the protagonist too lofty. The protagonist is a flesh-and-blood person with feelings. He is moved by beautiful women and possessive. Think about it. In the original work, the First Emperor also liked Gongsun Liji, and there were many beauties in the harem. Legend has it that the Yellow Emperor also commanded three thousand women to ascend to heaven, and the Jade Emperor also has the Queen Mother in his body. The protagonist is so tall that he becomes a saint. Being a man has desires. If Yan Lingji teases you naked, won't your body as a man react? If there is no response, it is the eunuch.

In addition to fire control and good martial arts, Yan Lingji is also very good at dancing. In the original work, she performed a dance for Han Fei in the Purple Orchid Pavilion, which was very beautiful.

Look at the beginning of your book: The moon rises in the Qin Dynasty and nine songs are eulogized by the sky's movement It reminds me of a very familiar eunuch: the title of the book seems to be The moon in the Qin Dynasty rides on the nine songs. The author is: The Scholar Who Abandoned His Pen After I finish reading it, I will see if it is you after I get a feel for the writing style!

😒That, what I want to say, doesn't the author know what's going on with Bai Qi and the Six Kingdoms? Aren't you afraid of death enough to go to the Six Kingdoms with a descendant of Bai Qi? Rentu Baiqi not only had hatred against Zhao State, but also had a lot of hatred against several other countries. Furthermore, the status of the Qin State is embarrassing. One of the excuses for the Five Kingdoms' attack on Qin was to demand the execution of Bai Qi, and Bai Qi was ordered to die by King Qin Zhaoxiang. As a descendant, before Ying Zheng came to power, was it appropriate for Lu Buwei to wander around while he was in power? And how could it be possible for you to take control of the military? Which veteran general is the deputy general? It is normal for the King of Qin not to notice, but you? Also, are you trembling? Anyway, your grandfather was killed. Also in ancient times, the emperor would never make a mistake. Even if he made a mistake, it was the fault of his ministers. As a descendant of Bai Qi, he would either be killed or demoted to a commoner. Who believes you? It also lets you master the Iron Blood Alliance. . . . . If in the Five Kingdoms, a bunch of people want to kill you, such as the Zhao Kingdom, the one before Li Si, it is because he is an envoy. Are you without soldiers or positions or quietly? Ying Zheng is still in danger in South Korea. Secondly, the overall strength of the Qin State is stronger than other countries, but it does not mean that you can fight in group fights. Several times, Qin State was forced outside Hangu Pass, and even lost a few times. It proves that Qin is invincible in single combat, but fighting in groups is not enough. This is because Yan is the troublemaker. It is the myth of Qin again.

Is the Bai Tu in the vast ocean your son or your father?

A person from the Qin State, or a high-level official, went to help Han Fei. Is he sick? ! ! ! Shouldn't we help the night make Korea more chaotic? ! ! ! ! It's because I want to write a fan of Tian Xing Jiu Ge, and I have to help the protagonist. So when I write about Qin Shiming Yue, should I help Tian Ming and others fight against Qin? ? ?

The writing is very good, at least it shows Ji Wuye's IQ, so that Ji Wuye is suitable for the night boss. But the only bad thing is that the goal of equality for everyone is something that cannot be achieved even in the modern world.

Miss Yan Lingji.