The Wudao of the Heavens Begins with Douluo

The protagonist's behavior is disordered, his character is unpredictable, and he completely follows his heart.

This book is a bit too sloppily written. The author can try to be more detailed. As for the character of the protagonist, it should be more standardized and clear, and the emotion should be brought into it.

The author can write about Jiang Ye, which is quite popular now.

The universe is a cold cemetery, and every civilization that escapes the limitations of the planet is a predator. The universe is 13.7 Billion years old. No one knows what dangers exist in the vast universe. You may dominate a star field, or you may have powerful power to cross the void... You never know whether there is a pair of eyes watching you in the unknown place... When one day, the void descends, is the unknown existence coming out of the black hole a friend or an enemy? Conspiracies and intrigues fill the world... You can find the ruins of the ancient heaven, and you can also see demons and cholera in the world. You have heard that the Great Sage Qitian became a Buddha on the spot, and you have also seen the golden cicada slaying demons in the world...

The author could have written about Glazed Glass, Flowers with Thousand Bones, Three Lives and Three Worlds, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms, Strange Tales of Ancient Swords, and Zhu Xian

There is a question: why is the protagonist always seriously injured or on the way to being seriously injured?

The writing is not bad. But what this author wrote has a grudge against all the protagonists of the original work. No matter what, I would go up to him with a knife and cut off his meridians, talents, etc., Destroying his family and destroying his three views. Are you hating the world? If you hadn't written this nonsense, your grades would have been much better than what you have now.

The female characters in the novel are relatively famous, and most of them are written by the author as the protagonist's licking dog. You also ruined the character Angel Yan.