Don't Make Trouble in the New World

After reading seven or eight chapters, I felt that the protagonist's mentality changed very quickly from the mentality of killing the whole family, to suddenly becoming a bit funny. The enthusiasm that appeared during the talent test made me uncomfortable 🤭

Come on, author. This book is light, humorous, full of youth and passion. It's a rare good book. Support it.

The title and introduction of the book are not attractive enough. Only with an attractive title and introduction can more people read it. The most attractive part of the book should be reflected in the title or introduction. In the end, it depends on whether the content of your own book can retain people.

Build a supporting building. If anyone wants to guest star, you can leave a message below.

The writing is quite good. It doesn't look like something written by a newbie. Come on, author! Just came to Qidian. Every day's tickets will be given to you.

The author can still stand it, everyone can rest assured Hahahahahaha

There are only 5 days left, 30 days of continuous updates. Don't stop. I've invested in new books.

Go find some book list owners and ask them to recommend it for you. This book is not bad. You should get some results if you recommend it.

After reading the first four chapters, the writing is average but not a big problem. Logically speaking, a rebirth stream should have a quick and explosive start and quickly create conflicts to attract readers, but the author gives you a running account. In addition to this, there are a lot of perspective changes and scenes are jumped repeatedly. It is recommended not to switch too many scenes. There are too many names in four chapters. It is recommended that unimportant characters not be named. Let the readers remember who the protagonist is first before thinking about other things.

After reading the introduction, I think it's okay, so I'll keep it for now.

After looking at the results, I saw that there had been no updates for a day. The latest one was from issue 7.1, And there was no chapter in issue 7.2. . It just felt like it was half cold. This book was pretty good, but the author couldn't stand it. .

In fact, I feel there is little hope. . I remember that once the word count reaches a certain number, you can directly sign up and put it on the shelves, but there is no recommendation space. I posted a post yesterday but it didn't pass review. I sprayed a few words about seven o'clock and flat g. You should treat this book as a hobby. If you have time, you can update a chapter. If you don't have time, take more rest. Personally, I still want to see the later part, where the protagonist chases his wife, hehehe

I just followed the silver reward from Mr. Qiankun and placed a small advertisement under the boss's post, haha! I don't know if anyone will come here.

Don't think that you can sign a contract if you write more. If you don't have a contract proposal for 100,000 words, you can just cut it off. Like Die Zhi or something, I forgot 2 million words of the name, and I didn't sign a contract. I have seen seven or eight books like this. If you want to make money, go for it. If you want to play by yourself, stop dreaming. If you want to achieve results, if you have 200,000 words, some books can be put on the shelves.

Come through the portal. It can be seen that the author worked hard! I admire such people very much. People who live seriously deserve respect. However, in the current environment of online writing, if you want to make money, it is very difficult! A professional writer only earns a few thousand dollars to make a living, and he also needs to have a certain reader base; if it's for a dream, that's fine, to earn some pocket money. The work has been read, and the book reviews have been written by senior writers. They are basically the same mistakes that novice writers make. As of now, the work is unattractive, come on! Of course this is also an objective analysis and personal opinion. After all, there are only a few great writers. This is no longer the case in the online writing environment of the past few years. Anyone can become a god, and readers are becoming more and more picky. To sum up, writers, come on, if you want to make money, you can cut the next book.

In the introduction, don't write about parents offering sacrifices to heaven and taking revenge.

I haven't seen it yet, and after reading the introduction, I have no desire to continue reading. I hope you keep up with the times and don't remain silent in the Internet world in the past few years.

I just read a dozen chapters, and overall it's pretty good, but I hope the author can write the supporting characters better, with online IQs. It's best to have as many monsters as possible, and at least have online emotional intelligence, and understand the world, after all, now There are not many idiots, right? For example, I feel that Han Jingxue's character is not very good. I was shocked at the beginning in the principal's office. I feel that this kind of woman has no brains. If she says such things in front of others, what will she say later? If you find it uncomfortable to watch, if you are writing a supporting role, I would like to give you a personal suggestion. You should design the character of the supporting character well. For example, whether this person is straightforward or sinister, and what role he or she will play in the development of the plot. How will it develop in the advancement of the plot? This involves the outline, so the outline is very important. It plays a skeleton role for your book as a whole. You said before that you haven't written an outline yet. I think you still need to do it. If you want to write a good book, you have to make a good outline. At the beginning of the outline of the book, you should briefly list how many parts it will be divided into, what kind of state the protagonist will reach in the end, and so on. But after dividing it into several parts, you will have to list the outline of that part in detail. What will the protagonist do in this volume, how big will this part of the map be, what will be the impact of those things, and what supporting characters will come out? List it out, and it will be easier to write like this, right? Well, that's all I have for the time being. I also feel that the protagonist is too faceless and I don't like it very much. I think it's best to hone the character of the protagonist later to make him more resolute and courageous (after all, as a warrior, you must have a more resolute character, right? My personal suggestion is that the author should write according to his own arrangement and don't be affected by my words). In addition, I am just a reader who likes to talk on paper. I will be very happy if you think I have absorbed something useful. 😁

Save it and read it tomorrow.

The names in your book... I can't stand them 😰

Are you going to die if you keep raising them? PS: I found this book from someone else's book list. After reading it, I thought it was pretty good, so I planned to keep it. Then I just finished reading a book today and flipped through the bookshelf. It's actually finished? ? ? PPS: Come on, author! !

Cut this book out and get a new one

To be honest, if I don't write well at the beginning and write well at the end, I won't have the desire to read on.

Does the author have any ideas for building a group? Or is there already a group?

If you want to waste time writing novels, then you need to know that writing novels requires a good setting, a grand worldview, character conflicts, and mystery and magnificence. Or the reality is so colorful that if it can't even be considered non-mainstream, it is still a bit far away from the mainstream.

After reading the first three pictures, I have nothing to read. They are too bland. Either make fun of it, or write something about the big picture of this plane, right? I personally think that, for example, some high-level people have said something about the situation. Similar similar.

Your introduction at the beginning is about parents offering sacrifices to heaven 😅

Surprisingly finished book! 😠😠😠