I Set up a Street Stall in a World Where Spiritual Energy Is Revived

Write more to improve your strength and find pets. Why are you always chirping so much

It seems a bit tiring to watch, and the process is inconsistent. The previous paragraph is here, and the next paragraph is in another place. There is no explanation and it is all up to the reader to understand? Once or twice is enough. Author, you use it too much and I feel uncomfortable.

If everything is done well, it will be like the flow of the heavens, and it will be accepted. How come the author is crooked?

The emotional scenes are not well written, that's my personal feeling.

Is the author letting himself go? What have you been doing lately? Are you planning to change the protagonist? It's a bit of a priority.

Your slap-in-the-face plot is too much, one after another without stopping, but overall it's pretty good, no big general issues, and the imagination is good.

The whole text is not smooth, and I can't pick up the previous chapter or the next chapter.

The setting is good, but the writing is not good. The name is street stall, but the ambition of running a street stall is not much, just to be an idle fish. You can set up a stall and open a small shop first, or if someone needs you, you can go to a secret place to obtain inheritance.

Tested for poison. Definitely poisonous Goodbye👋

It's always those boring contradictions, you know the ending after reading the beginning

I'm just curious, why can this spiritual energy recovery video be bargained for? Did the author think about it?

That's it. The formation at Longhu Mountain is the Xuanwu Formation, and what it gathers together is Emperor Zhenwu. If I remember correctly, shouldn't it be from Wudang?

Not interesting,,,,,,,,

It is recommended that the author establishes a dynasty in a small world and does not say that he has no time to take care of dynasty affairs. Just leave it to your subordinates. You can also upgrade the small world and promote the upgrade of the earth.

It is recommended to establish the two-in-one development of Yun Chao and Li Jiao in the small world affiliated with the earth. Establish a sect on earth. The two worlds complement each other. Promote the upgrading of the small world to the big world, and drive the upgrading of the earth.

It's a good setting, but it was ruined by the writing. It's uncomfortable to drive. You can learn from the car in "I Really Just Want to Farm". I feel that the author can practice more writing skills and restart this setting when there is improvement in the future. If the golden finger is too large, there should be more restrictions. The emotional scenes are too awkward and stiff, and the situation develops too fast. You can slow down, pay attention to some details, and describe the characters. This should be the author's first book. If you practice more, I believe the author will write well. He has a good idea😊

This book is still very good! I have some small suggestions, and I hope the author will take them into consideration! First, Taishangzong is not as good as Taishangdao! The sect leader is not as tall as the Taoist master! Secondly, I hope that the protagonist will unify the small world, and then he can be the Emperor of Heaven or the Taoist Ancestor! Then refine world consciousness and become the master of the world! Control the laws of heaven! The third is that the protagonist uses the small world as a logistics base and the main world Qingmang Mountain as the base camp to develop and grow Taishangdao! Fourth, the main world has many creations, and the small world can be promoted with the treasures of the main world! This will lead to the improvement of the protagonist's cultivation!

It is recommended to read this novel and read the game "Yangshen Yggdrasil" to have a more immersive feeling 🌹

I like the author, whether you like it or not

What's the use of this system? The sense of presence is too low.

Does this system have too little sense of humor? Also, the pastor is a bit too awesome. The starting point for the pig's feet at the beginning is very high! Not my cup of tea, let's go.

After setting up the stall for a day or two, all the heavens went crazy 😰

It's a long paragraph. If you want to read it, the author will take a screenshot.

Maybe there is something wrong with the writing style. There are hundreds of chapters and dozens of comments. After reading a few chapters, I felt that I had no interest in reading anymore. If the protagonist is a funny guy, it is almost certain that the writing style is lacking!