The Most Powerful Brain Breaking the Chrysalis

The plot is quite satisfactory. Friends who are book lovers can check it out. It's pretty good.

A very bad start, Mystery Man. . These days, noisy systems are despised by people, not to mention you, the mastermind behind the scenes, it seems that the protagonist is just a pawn, an experimental product

I feel that the written expression is relatively clear, and it can be seen that my Chinese score should not be bad. However, the plot is obviously not enough. Maybe I have studied too many Internet writing routines, so I always wanted to dress up and slap people in the face to create the cool points of the article. In fact, this is a bit self-defeating. The plot is too blunt and the cool points are deliberately created to make people feel uncomfortable. Some of the plots are too white, which makes people feel a bit embarrassed. 🤝

This is not a piece of writing, the author is bound to be popular!

To be honest! The plot of persuading people to quit is quite vicious. I can't understand how this plot of persuading people to quit on the eve of the college entrance examination was thought up. Morally speaking, I feel that you are maliciously vilifying the people's teachers. Logically I feel like you are mocking the intelligence of our readers. Whose parents don't want their children to become successful? Whose child is not the cherished child of his parents? If you interrupt your child's college entrance examination, doesn't that mean you interrupt your child's future? Don't your parents fight with you? Moreover, as soon as they tried to persuade them to quit, they tried to persuade many of them to quit. Believe it or not, if this happened, the parents would be able to tear down the school?

You are the most powerful brain fake. It depends on how good you are in fighting. Didn't you see that his brain is extremely smart?

It's very immersive, the storyline is well told, and the author must be very knowledgeable.

Renew! Renew! Renew! Say important things three times😁😁😁

The story is quite twisty and worth reading, waiting for updates

Big Boss np

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I have read the three golden chapters, and looked at the follow-up table of contents. It seems to be a simple novel... Specific feelings: 1. Internet novels are fast food after all. They commit suicide as soon as they start. It is quite poisonous. Where does the charm of the protagonist come from? 2. The three chapters are a bit long-winded and never got to the point. If I hadn't read the introduction of the novel, I wouldn't know what to say 3. Teacher, doctor, it's hard to explain in one sentence Suggestions: 1. Go directly to the topic, such as waking up at the beginning of the chapter, and explain the whole story through the dialogue between parents, doctors and the protagonist. 2. The suicide link can be removed and changed to a gas leak at home. You can also increase the sense of suspense later: is it accidental or man-made? Even if it is accidental, it is easy to understand. Fatty, lethargy, a combination of circumstances 3. There is no need to clean up, who says teachers and doctors can't be bad? So what if it's bad within the rules? What's wrong with increasing the enrollment rate? What's wrong with saving people?

To be honest, I wouldn't have started writing novels if I hadn't been tired of reading system setting articles. I even feel now that writing novels is more enjoyable than reading novels, especially this kind of plot novels. I feel like those who write about settings are like paying public wages. Oh, Goldfinger is so cool. Counterattack and review. It's not that I can't stand it, but it just doesn't have the appeal of focusing on the plot.

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