Unification of the World Begins with Surrender

The book is quite good, but why are the grades so bad? 🤫🤫 Come on, author! If you write like this, you may become a god. I have been a bookworm for nine years and have witnessed the birth of several great gods! Come on!

I think similar stories about prodigalism are a bit too deliberate in provoking the prodigal family, and then the subordinates make up their own minds, which backfires. In the early stage, you can deliberately spend money, but in the early and mid-term, when you have strength, you don't need to deliberately spend money. If it is just for the sake of squandering money, it is easy to lose readers.

Author: Your writing is a bit broken! The IQ of the supporting characters is too low, which does not match the sense of substitution of the Spring and Autumn and Warring States Period. Even if the main character is mentally retarded, the secondary characters are also mentally retarded. How can you become a hero if you don't have high IQ or EQ? What's more, in Qi State, the prince is mentally retarded and the military advisor is mentally retarded, so there must be experts. This is probably the reason why the editor does not recommend it. Come on and work hard!

The writing is quite good, and the updates are diligent. However, some of the characters in it cannot be guessed as their historical counterparts. This chapter says it would be better to introduce some popular science when there is time. Just read the novel to learn history. This is just a small suggestion. After all, writing for DaDa is quite hard.

This ending is really hard to describe in one sentence. It's understandable that you want to finish it, and it's hard work to compare the words, but it's too deceptive to let the damn male supporting actor benefit from the ending. Isn't it better to let the male protagonist win? Wouldn't it be nice to feel happy at the end? The male protagonist believed that the male partner treated him as a brother, but in the end, the male partner was duplicitous and won in the end. It was so depressing to see

To be honest, the protagonist's deliberate prodigality is almost unbearable to watch. When will prodigality turn into struggle? Although the prodigal character of the protagonist is a bit funny and I enjoyed watching it, I always felt like it was a waste of time while watching it, as if I was reading unnutritious books.

In the end, I knew that the author didn't care about the situation, so he ended it hastily and let the good brothers take over the world! The front is fine, but the back is loose! ! !

Why does it feel like no one is watching? I feel like the writing is okay.

I think this is the funniest history, but I like it

Are there any rules for adding updates? Can it be updated?