Mopan

I have nothing to do this morning. I read the first ten chapters of the book carefully. I have some small feelings. Even if it is a short book review, don't blame me~ Let me talk about the advantages first. This book really has many advantages, the first one is the writing style! The author has such a great writing style, should I get 150 points for Chinese language~ The whole text gives people a fairy-like feeling, and the interspersed poems are all remote and cool ancient poems, not the kind of bad street ones, it is really a pleasure to read. Second, the most commendable thing is that the martial arts words used in writing martial arts are very penetrating, and the names are also very suitable for the occasion, just like Wugen Taoist, etc., Etc., Da Da really paid attention to it. I feel that I have been preparing for it for a long time and have read a lot of books. In short, the writing style is really the pinnacle of male videos I have watched~ Third, the world view of this book is very grand and complete, but it doesn't feel messy at all. I think I wrote the outline in detail, right? At least it feels like it. There are wonderful verses, descriptions of fairyland, and some of the author's own thoughts, which are really a lot~ There are advantages and disadvantages. First of all, I think the writing style of Dada is so good, and the shortcomings are also in the writing style. Because the writing style of Dada is so good, it seems to be a bit packed with rhetoric in some places. The poems interspersed in it are also good, but it feels a bit dense. Secondly, I feel that the plot is a bit fragmented, that kind of feeling that doesn't have a strong physical impact? In fact, the story could be made stronger and the language description should be reduced appropriately. This is just my humble opinion. I usually don't watch many male videos. It's very possible that I'm wrong. Don't blame me I will always support you~ Come on

1. The introduction attracted me. I must have thought about it or planned it for a long time! 2. The opening chapter is straightforward and straightforward. 3. Certain words and phrases are well received, such as those descriptions of junior sister Chen Xin, which can make the stars and the moon shine. Looking forward to the later stage and encouraging each other

The writing is very good. I have saved it, I hope! ! ! Keep writing

Why is there no update? Come on!

It is very literary, with frequent good sentences and excellent writing style. It can better combine the literary talent with the plot 🤭 Some paragraphs can also be divided into sections. Ps: The composition score must be very high 🤭

After reading the first three chapters, the writing style is great, the introduction is well received, the writing style is full of ancient charm, the opening introduction also has a fantasy flavor, and the story theme is also very novel. But I personally have a small suggestion. I think the wording can be a little more plain, because when reading novels, the wording is too gorgeous, which makes readers feel a little tired. I have forgotten what happened before when I read the end. For your next new book, you might consider ancient Chinese language. The writing style is so ancient~

The new book has been submitted, Wuhu, Take Off~

Collect it, please be careful, broken chapters are a big no-no! I see that most of the update dates are disconnected. This is not good. Here are some suggestions. I hope you will see them~ ☆ﾐ(o*･ω･)ﾉ

It looks great, come and support me 😄

Another two wonderful chapters. The writing style is very good and the skills are very good.

It's a good piece of literary work, it looks good, I'll keep up with it, I'll come and go often 😜

It's well written, but it's a little lacking and I didn't enjoy it.

Very well written, I accepted it decisively, keep up the good work!

It's very well written, I hope there will be more

The writing style is grand, and the writing has its own world. If I have to give some advice, I can only say that there may be some readers who like to read novice articles and are not very attracted to articles of this style. But I like 🤭

I don't watch much male videos, but after reading your book, the opening chapter is very attractive and very immersive. I will continue writing. I'm optimistic about you! Come on!

The writing is very fairy-like and ancient, and the description is very smooth. The introduction is very interesting, but the title of the book feels a bit discouraging and should not be too literary, as this will not extract much information.

I read eight chapters carefully, and the writing style is so large that I have nothing to say. The language is concise and concise. As a fan of ancient Chinese, I find it very enjoyable. The description of the grand atmosphere is also delicate, and both the scenery and the scene are very picturesque. The fighting scenes are even more detailed and passionate, and are very exciting to watch. Especially the struggle between the male protagonist being forced to kill and the benevolent feelings in his heart during the fight, as well as the male protagonist's psychological transformation, are particularly well written! It makes people read it as tragic and helpless, but it doesn't seem to be a thorn in the side. The only shortcoming is that the transition is deliberately unnatural. Pay more attention to it, otherwise it will be like a simple and gorgeous wardrobe, with fine golden nanmu, fine workmanship, and famous reliefs, but due to some flaws in the joints, the quality of this wardrobe will not be improved. This is a pity! Personal opinion! I don't know if it's right or not. However, the book is still good, I will continue to pay attention to it in the future, and I look forward to a great transformation!

I feel that the writing style is really interesting and has the feel of a classical fairy tale. However, people nowadays are so obsessed with novices that this book should not only have immediate results, but should be better.