The First Son-In-Law of Yongle Dynasty

To be honest, there is something wrong with your writing. First of all, the scene switching is vaguely written, and there is a problem with context connection. Your idea is very interesting, and it can be said to be attractive. The setting is just a bit rough and unsatisfactory. I wanted to do something since I was born, so why not write a few years later, or maybe a little older. It's hard to resonate with this writing.

In my opinion, it's better for the protagonist to time travel to age 13 or above! Baby? What can you do? When a monster is burned?

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Passing by and trampling😁😁

Brother, you must be very busy. Will update haha

At the beginning of the first chapter, people are stirred up and caught, and they sink in a second. Come on, master.

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🙂 Come and support, come on!

Well written! Come on! Christmas Eve fruit is delivered!

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I finally got my account back, no nonsense, 14 votes for it! 🥰

The poison comes in every day, I hope...

If the protagonist plays like this, isn't he afraid of being burned to death?