Begin with Beyond Conan

When I saw Chapter 190, I was about to enter the paid chapter. I can only say that I am in a book shortage and have nothing to do. I am not short of money, so I will continue to spend money to read. Now let me talk about my current views on this book. First of all, if you want to watch the author's original plot, you can leave after watching the Chinese plot at the beginning. Let me first state that I am only focusing on the plot of Conan. After all, I have not read the other original works. There is not much difference between the plot of Conan and the protagonist of this book or not. People who die will still die. Most of them just copy the original works. At most, they are insignificant changes such as changing the funeral to a birthday party. Secondly, the fact that the protagonist travels through time and knows Conan himself is a failure for this book. If the author mentions at the beginning that he only knows Conan, but does not know it deeply, it is acceptable. However, Miyano Akemi has obvious selective amnesia. Since we know who Akemi Hirota is and that she is Miyano Shiho's sister, there is no reason not to remember the billion-dollar robbery. It's acceptable to not remember much about the process, but how could you forget the main part? It's really just copied. After the protagonist did a lot of useless work, it had no impact on the plot at all. At most, Gin changed his license plate. Also, if the author will open a new book, please check the information before starting to code. There are a few Japanese common sense and geographical location errors. It doesn't matter if some people don't know, but as long as some readers write mistakes in the chapter reviews, based on the herd mentality, people who don't understand it themselves will think that the book is not good. Also, please write the characters in a logical manner and do not completely copy the original work. You are a second author and you need to automatically correct the logical errors in the original work. This is what readers want to see. Also, this is the first time I have seen an author copying the original work from beginning to end in his first book. I always thought this was a way for old authors to consume their credibility, but I never expected that there are new authors doing this. Finally, if the author writes a book just for his own pleasure and out of pure interest, he can ignore me. But if you expect to make money by writing a book, please check the information and think about the original plot before opening a new book, so that readers can see the protagonist's changes to the original work. This is what we want to see. The case in China at the beginning is pretty well written, with only a few logical flaws, but it doesn't matter. In the end, the author insisted on finishing the book and just regarded it as a practice book. I hope your next book will turn you around.

When tracking Gin, I left my glasses for the police to track Gin. Personally, I felt that although I had an idea, it was a bit naive and should be a failure! 1. You drive a motorcycle with two children at a speed of 280km/s (it is too easy to arouse suspicion, mainly because you are carrying two children, and the focus is on the children and the speed) 2. The organization can easily find the clue "glasses" in the police, and with the common ability of "instant memory" in detective dramas, it is easy to remember where you have seen it, which will trigger an investigation without ignoring the protagonist. It is simply from darkness to light! 3. There is no effective attack on the organization, just a small amount of damage, which can only satisfy the inner comfort, and it is easy to be exposed! The gain outweighs the loss! 4. This is the world of detectives. You should also use detective thinking. At least you should not leave any directional evidence or clues on the surface (instead of taking an anesthesia needle and rushing in like Conan, like Conan was originally positioned as a reading for primary school students). 5. Whose identity do you want to call the police? To dispatch in such a short time, the identity you use must be close enough to the police. Once used, this identity is also a clue, and the organization will not investigate! The main thing is that I will think about it afterwards and make inferences about abnormal things. The next time I hear information related to "glasses", it will be directly exposed! (After all, Conan often uses glasses to track prisoners). Based on the capabilities of that world, more than 70% of your identities were exposed within a month of this operation! 100% Exposed in one month, are you ready for the showdown? You underestimate the capabilities of this organization. It is a multinational organization after all!

To be honest, I didn't want to watch Love at First Sight when I saw it. It's obviously motivated by sex

After reading more than 20 chapters, I fell in love at first sight and started to drink myself into alcohol when I found out that the other person had a boyfriend? A time traveler! That's dozens of years in two lifetimes! It's really disgusting to do this →_→

Now that I see the four characters Zhuge Dali, my scalp goes numb.

After reading Chapter 70, can I say that I feel that the protagonist is a bit mentally retarded?

In Chapter 53, in order for the protagonist to start the main plot, Masami Hirota died and was forcibly killed. . , And the protagonist is a slut in this episode of Hirota Masami. . . And anyone who has watched Conan, Masami Hirota should know it. . . Then the protagonist's memory is fragmented at a critical moment. . . . To be honest, if you want to watch solved crimes, Detective Conan 1000 episodes are really enough to watch. . . . , I think Conan's articles mainly focus on daily life, redemption, and bad taste. Needless to say, daily life, redemption is similar to Masami Hirota, and bad taste is Conan and Kaito. Just imagine that Conan is Shinichi, Kaito is a Kaito, and Lan and Ao know about it, then the bad taste will arise spontaneously. . . .

Can't the author write? The front part is exactly the same as the one in the anime, exactly the same, except that one person is forced into the middle, just like the plot of Memory Egg, the house that should be burned is still burned, the people who should be arrested are exactly the same, and the dead people are all dead. There is also the previous plot, the damn person is dead, the murderer is the same, the plot is the same, the change method is the same, you wrote a loneliness, but just shoehorned a person in the middle, it is better to watch the anime.

Detective Zuo Xiang and his partner Philip

Why is it Mao Lilan's novel without a female protagonist? Forget it my sister is Mao Lilan.

Divine Providence? Are you involved in Killer 47? Are you capable enough to write it? Have you made an outline or something? I'm a little worried about writing it down.

I just want to ask, "Didn't the protagonist travel through time?" Why does he act like he doesn't know anything? If I don't tell you everything, there are some impressive ones that I can remember. It would be better to just lose my memory if I write like this.

It's strange, it's so well written, why is the popularity so low?

No matter how you want to write it, tampering with the original prisoner is going too far. (The Magician at the End of the Century_Pu Si Qinglan)

The biggest problem with this book is that the main character is like a loser emotionally.

The author is also very perseverant 🙄

The first sentence of the introduction blew me away.

The main plot line is a bit slow, and the branch cases are basically the same as Conan. I have no desire to read it. Those who can read this book are Conan fans. Is it interesting to reconstruct the case again? Also, this world is a composite world of multiple plots, so don't separate the plots too much.

1000+ Chapters, only 44 discussion posts? ? ?

Advantages: It is rare among Conan fans to not destroy the original characters and not mess up the cp. The early plot is smooth. Although the system has great effects, the author has a good grasp of it and does not overwhelm the main character Disadvantages: I made some mistakes when writing the original plot. As for Hirota, he can obviously save him and win. It's a mistake to write in a trance, even if you write something drugged; the subsequent plot is not very "comic style" and is a bit sloppy, but the problem is not big Summary: A good quality fanfic is a mixture of elements from other works, not a single fanfic. I hope there will be surprises in the paid content in the future, but the performance of this book at the starting point is a bit poor, which is why it attracts so many people.

The protagonist is not a pure lover There is more than one lover The world view is a second creation that is too mixed with other works

The author really wants to see Ibuki and Shima

After chasing for a long time, it's finally over! Personally, I feel that this is a very interesting fan work. Counting the period when the last update was discontinued, it is already the second update. The ending is pretty good, and it's very thoughtful.