
Traveling Across the Heavens Begins with Practicing Swordsmanship in the Palace
穿越诸天从自宫练剑开始
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- Completed
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- 627k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Wuxia Fantasy
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Those who come to see the protagonist from the palace will leave as soon as they grow up.
After practicing the Sunflower Manual to the depths, gods and humans will be reincarnated. In this case, it should be more thorough. You, the author of Dongfang Bubai's unfinished feat, can let the protagonist practice the Sunflower Manual to the peak, directly transform into gods and humans, and completely become a woman, and then in Lily, don't you want it? ? ? ? I'm a fucking genius! ! !
When you read the second chapter, you can see that the sentence is wrong. The protagonist has poor qinggong and cannot jump over the courtyard wall, but he can jump three feet! According to the measurement of one foot, three meters and three meters, damn, the protagonist's courtyard wall is at least ten meters high! Abuse!
Come to see the protagonist from the palace, if you want to stay longer, leave.
I lost my mood when I saw the main character acting like a dog, and he was still proud of the Jianghu system. This system is worse than no system at all.
You've already married yourself, so what kind of girl do you want to bring?
I feel like the author has a trashy personality and is suitable for writing pornographic stories.
I found a novel about the plot of Swordsman. The protagonist is always mentally ill. Lin Zhennan and his family can make the Fuwei Escort Agency bigger and stronger without being eaten up by the local wealthy families. The black and white people will be like in the novel. A mere Qingcheng faction and Mu Gao The peak can be destroyed. The Lin family must have a strong network of common interests to make the escort agency bigger and stronger. For example, the local military Qianhu Office, Jin Yiwei, state government yamen, and wealthy gentry families. As long as the Lin family is willing to bleed a mere Qingcheng faction, they can be wiped out with a snap of their fingers. Don't say that the court won't take care of it, or that people in the world are not afraid of the court.
How to put it, it's very complicated. If an impotent man still misses girls all day long, it's the same if he can't cut her off with one knife. It's better to cut him off earlier, be more domineering and slightly Nuonuo. At first, he thinks about having fun in a few days, but at the end of the day, he wants to live and abandons his family and runs away. The protagonist is really like this~
After reading more than a dozen chapters, it was okay not to move, but the fight with a maid grossed me out. Has the author never seen a woman?
What a bullshit book. It's useless to have a system that drags down the protagonist. Dogecoin, the protagonist is mentally retarded if we separate.
Abuse main text
The main text is semi-abuse, and the author makes the protagonist look like a fool, indecisive. Bye-Bye.
In fact, I don't read this book much 🤫 I just support the Zhutianliu author. I prefer the one who travels through Zhutian alone, preferably without a female protagonist, 😊
Ever since that maid came out, I've been really disgusted by you.
The forced start is a bit confusing. The whole family is about to be wiped out, but it is still experiencing the life of the second generation of rich people. You said that the protagonist is not used to ancient life and gives up treatment, and enjoys it for a few days before death. It makes sense, but there is no subsequent story. You said that the protagonist just traveled through time and was disguising himself for fear of being spotted, but this is not reflected in the book at all. The idea is quite good, let's change the beginning! You were quite annoying at the beginning.
The author doesn't know how to write routines at all, but you still like to arrange routines for yourself, which makes the protagonist look like a ghost and the reading experience is poor.
I can't stand it anymore, I really worry about the protagonist's intelligence. Swordsman ultimately relies on his own martial arts, a funny feeling
It's so poorly written. . . Not as good as what I wrote
The author explains about the fence. According to the setting in martial arts, it is normal for Qinggong to leap ten feet, but the real ordinary city wall in history may only be 5 or 6 meters, and the top of Xiangyang City is only about ten meters. That is three feet. If it is based on the real height, what kind of ladder does Guo Daxia need in Xiangyang City? Yunzong steps on the city wall to use his strength, and he can jump back and forth many times on one leg. Yang Guo had to use a horse to cushion him when he jumped from the three-foot-high city wall. He was too weak. So in order to be logical, you either have to lower the lightness value, or you have to make the wall higher.
The opening is very unreasonable. You haven't run away after being here for more than ten days, and you only seem to run away when things are about to happen. This is a forced opening.
It's fascinating. As a bookworm who has been reading for 10 years, I finally came across a novel that I am fascinated by again and again. But the updates are not strong enough. The author should update it soon! And remember to add it to the top! ! !
The protagonist is a eunuch, and the author is quick
In fact, go to Putian South Shaolin. It has a long history, is very hidden, and is very powerful. The same goes for Lin Yuantu. He obviously left Southern Shaolin, but he didn't go far. He only settled in Fuzhou, which was only more than 200 miles away from Putian in Southern Shaolin. This is just a way to avoid disaster. The Qingcheng faction thought they were going to the northwest, but you went to the southeast. After more than two hundred miles, it was another fast horse. They arrived in the second or third day. By the time the Qingcheng faction reacted, they had already escaped from the cage.
By the way, there is no need to charge more for girls. Nowadays, harem novels are not as popular as before. Furthermore, as the protagonist of the original work, Linghu Chong still needs to keep a cp. There is no need to grab them all.
He was tricked by Hundred Flowers Girl and even took his maid everywhere with him. He is also awesome. Give up the trick.
It's useless to eat it, it's a pity to throw it away!
As long as the writing is good and the recommendation vote is fine,
I've raised more than a dozen chapters, let's start!
I'm raising, you didn't subscribe when you put it on the shelves, because I mainly use another account now, and that account can't post comments, so I just found out when I logged in to this account, support the new author, I suggest not to use the eunuch, the unfinished version is better than the eunuch 🤝 Make up for the full subscription
Brother, come on, it will be fine