Angel Travelers Walking in the Heavens

I read it in one go, it's a great story! There may be flaws, but I don't mind at all! Come on, author! Some people say that the two brothers, especially Dean, are the main evil force, and the problem with the screenwriting is that they often speak cruelly and forcefully towards non-human beings. But I don't think it's a bit of a licking, just like the character you like is always pampered hahaha "Black Robe" I've only heard about "Sanctuary" and "Ghost (?)" I haven't watched, but by forcing the protagonist to figure out the background clues and main characters, I basically I also understand it, and the plot is well written! Now that Richard is basically invincible, the question is how the plot should go... Invincible flow is generally fresh at first, and will tend to become boring if there is no other attraction for readers later. Personally, I no longer care about the protagonist's strength growth (he is invincible hahaha). Growth seems to have no use other than becoming cooler, unless he goes to a higher-level, more dangerous world. So there should be two directions: First, traveling between different works, maintaining new characters, conflicts and stories is the most important thing to attract readers. The second is a more dangerous world. You can advance in both directions... But I don't want the world to pass through to become more and more powerful and dangerous...! Because I feel that once an unchanging routine is formed, it will become boring. Hope to keep the good plot and character interactions hahaha, just like what I have written so far. The above comments are purely my own opinions. I finally come across a story I like and I hope it will get better and better. But I have never written a fanfic, and I don't want to point fingers. If the author disagrees with something, just write it as you see fit. Anyway, I will read it. As a fan of Evil Force, the original work is too sad. Please give him a good ending... At least the four SDCC people can live well... I personally hope that there will be "Good Omens". What will Uncle C's expression be like if he has the same name as him... There are also "Constantine" and "Lucifer" mentioned by previous book friends. The starting point of "Marvel" was written so much that it was almost ruined, and it felt like it was not easy to write. It's up to the author to make his own decision. If he's not interested in writing, forget about it. It's not sweet to be too forceful hahahaha

Although everyone is mentioning all kinds of problems, I actually think it's okay. Sometimes you don't have to delve into the details when reading an article. After all, the author's writing style is not bad, and each master writes it step by step. I look forward to a good ending. In addition, I have been chasing evil forces for so many years 😃

Let me complain. This is why I always feel that American TV series have no IQ. I often see the boss with full-level magic equipment being beaten to death by a novice with a whiteboard equipment, or the boss is killed by garbage magic. In addition, the boss gives the protagonist power, and then the protagonist uses this power to kill the boss or injure him. Anyway, what I see is basically like this.

To be honest, the creativity is actually quite good. But the content is a bit self-deprecating for fans. The Wen family's Shuangsha is widely circulated, so you can still know a little bit about it. The second world is simply confused. The author needs to consider the readers who have not read the original work, and narrate it from multiple perspectives, so as to create supporting characters. In addition, the protagonist keeps changing locations uneasily, and the story does not progress well at all. Rather than looking for something, it feels more like being led by the nose. If you think about it carefully, it really looks like a game character, from behavioral patterns to thought patterns. And there is too little interaction with the characters, so that the relationship with other characters seems very weak. The true meaning of travel lies in taste, and the protagonist is more like a quick tour. Generally speaking, it may be that the progress of the story is too urgent. The story framework and creativity are still great, I hope the author can improve these shortcomings.

I just like to read this kind of gay articles about gay people. The author writes them well.

It's over. After being lazy and not updating once, there will often be a second time. Just like a cat cheating, many authors will become less and less, and finally become a eunuch. . .

I really like this kind of American TV series fan fiction, but there are too few articles like Qidian. They are all Marvel fan fiction and I almost vomited. Has the author read "Warrior Sisters"? That world setting is quite suitable for the protagonist to pretend to be bi. After all, it must be a surprise when an archangel suddenly emerges from the fight between humans and demons. I don't have much pocket money, but I will definitely try my best to support the author🤭🤭🤭

In the early stage, the protagonist was too licky. Others disliked you and you kept getting behind others. You were driven away by others, and then you came back to stalk me. This licking made me quit. Goodbye.

I hope the author will include those two funny characters in Good Omens, the angel and the devil.

When will the protagonist go to the Grimm TV show? I want to see the expressions of a group of Grimm creatures when they see an angel.

The protagonist is really a licker, and the protagonist of Supernatural 2 is like a big fool. If it weren't for the protagonist's halo, I would have died countless times. If you force yourself to lick you, ordinary people can't do anything about it. You are an angel and still have such virtue. You clearly know that these two people are being noticed, and you also said that you don't want to be noticed by the boss, and you still post it. It's schizophrenic. Then you feel that you are strong and not afraid. Who gave you the courage.

It's rare to write about the power of evil and there is no big stud in the harem, so it's a pity that it will be updated. . .

This early stage is too poisonous! You are so shameless that you insist on following the Wen family's twin evil spirits, and you can't even scold them. You are an angel who understands the plot. Isn't it good to go solo? You have to do dog licking, there is no sense of involvement at all

Can you please stop messing around in reality? As soon as I saw the words "spiritual recovery", I wanted to vomit. I was really scared. I understand that once your spiritual energy is revived, you can do whatever you want, and you can do it for a long time, but you have to pursue something, right? Isn't it bad to have my own way? The protagonist has a great time traveling through the infinite time, so why does he return to reality? Is the author unable to resist your desire to pretend? To be honest, the author's writing style is very average. You can still read it if you follow the plot, but don't open up loopholes in your head.

Pig feet are sick, right? Be close to others and act like a younger brother.

After raising it, you forget it. After forgetting it for a while, you enter the palace 🔨🔨🔨

You can go to some fantasy worlds where there is belief in God but no God or angels appear, such as ghost shows, Grimm, etc.

When I first read it, this article was quite interesting to be honest. The only drawback was that it was a bit dry. Just like some dialogues, the author has covered them in just a few sentences, and I feel like they could be written in more detail. It doesn't matter if it's a bit watery, it's better than looking like an introduction. Some authors may be worried about being criticized by readers, so they shorten the story a lot and it doesn't make you feel as much when you read it. But it's better than many works! Come on, author! !

Can you write more about the plot of Black Robe Pickets, including the second part?

Angel, American TV series. This cannot include the fallen angel Lucifer∵Morning Star

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