The Southern Song Dynasty Began with the Apprenticeship of Huang Sang

Shen Wansan is not a character author in the late Yuan Dynasty, but in the early Ming Dynasty. You wrote that he was born during the Condor Period. This is inappropriate and speechless.

Your timeline is too messy. Huang Rong is younger than Guo Jing. Since Huang Yaoshi's wife is pregnant, it means that Guo Jing was already born. Wang Chongyang and Lin Chaoying had been dead for several years when Guo Jing was born. How could it be possible that the Quanzhen Sect has not been founded yet? Several years have passed since the Five Jue Huashan Swordsmanship. Huang Shang originally fought against the Ming Cult, but later he died of old age after his longevity was exhausted, many years before Huashan Sword Theory. 😅 In addition, the history of distilled liquor in my country can be traced back to the Western Han Dynasty. This is supported by archaeological unearthed cultural relics, and bronze distilled liquor equipment has been unearthed.

You are writing a novel about a ball, and you are writing a fanfic about Legend of the Condor Heroes. You can't even write the time correctly. It's like copying your homework and copying it all wrong. Stop writing. It's so embarrassing!

I can't stand it anymore, it's so poisonous! Does the innate power come from the Nine Yin Manual? I was so disgusted!

The funniest thing is the Nine Yin Manual written by Huang Shang himself. I wonder what the content of the first volume is?

A Hanfu dog slave drove you away, and the master handed him over to you to deal with. You actually repaid him with kindness and forgive him. If I had slapped him to death. So poisonous

It was indeed a good subject, but it was ruined by his mindless self-excitement.

Damn, the writing is too messy, please hurry up and get rid of it.

His IQ was not up to par, and he couldn't stand watching it from the beginning. Didn't Huang Shang dare to hand Yang Chengye the contents of the scroll before passing on the Kung Fu?

In ancient times, it seemed that only teachers and students could call him sir, right? As long as it's a man, just call him sir and it's so embarrassing

Brother, when you write about martial arts, you just write about martial arts, and a cultivator comes out. Isn't this a dimensionality reduction attack? You become a first-class official without any merit, which makes those who fight on the battlefield embarrassed. When you become a senior official, you don't want to honor your mother. You offend this and that, so why don't you kill them all and save them to destroy your own family? It's comfortable. The protagonist is completely stupid.

Randomly made up, just a bunch of lies

Huang Shang ran into the mountains and hid for 40 years in 1120. He died after 1160. When he died, Wang Chongyang was still a boy and was fighting against the Jin Dynasty. The other four martial arts were born just around the same time. The young hero of the Beggar Gang who was taught by Xu Zhu was a figure of the same period as Yue Fei. Hong Qigong was born after 1160. Qiao Feng and Hong Qigong were separated by five or six generations. I found that the author wrote Jin Yong's martial arts in a random way.

This timeline is really messed up and is just nonsense.

Author, before you write a book, please read the original work carefully or check the information. It looks very embarrassing for you Hu Ji to write randomly.

According to the timeline, Huang Shang should be from the Northern Song Dynasty!

Huang Shang was from the Northern Song Dynasty, but the author went to the Southern Song Dynasty.

Fan fiction must be written according to the real time of the original work, and the characters of the story cannot be modified based on the results of people's guesses on the Internet. The original work has a smaller plot, and the stories of hidden characters should be developed separately as much as possible. The plot of the original work is always mixed with it. Why don't you write the protagonist's own story, but write the plot development of the original work?

I just meddle in other people's business because I'm afraid I won't die quickly enough.

The writing is good, but the timeline is confusing. The characters and events are a bit like a chronicle, and the main plot is confusing. Of course, the martial arts novel is mainly about martial arts. Huang Tang's transfer of skills is very sudden. The protagonist immediately transfers the skills as soon as he says it and then dies. After reading it for a long time, he used medical skills to save people and drink wine. When you have children, don't write in the name of martial arts when writing history. When writing about martial arts, reduce the weight of dynasty pens. It's not about martial arts and it's a martial arts story. Huang Tang teaches martial arts and still wants to hang out in the court. It's neither fish nor fowl 😰😰😰

Salt and iron are not controlled products

This is the first time in more than ten years that I have read a book and wanted to criticize the author. The timeline is so messed up that it doesn't add up at all, and the logic of the writing is confusing. It's just nonsense! ! !

When writing fan fiction, can you read the original work before writing it? It's just random writing. Huang Shang was from the Huizong period of the Northern Song Dynasty, and Guo Jing, Huang Rong and others were from the late Southern Song Dynasty. There is a difference of more than 100 years. Did Zhou Botong know how to use empty fists before going to Peach Blossom Island? How poisonous!

The same goes for these authors. When they write mythology, they write like martial arts, but when they write martial arts, they don't sound like martial arts. . . . Hopeless

The character portrayal is too awkward, the character's personality changes at any time, the male protagonist is written as a villain with different appearances, and the female character's image is distorted and her outlook is broken!

I read it to kill time, but I could only read more than 170 chapters. It was too watery, with no useful information at all and only a low word count. I was drowned by the author.

Huang Shang died in 1130 in history, but Yideng lived decades longer than in history, so it is understandable that Huang Shang is still alive. But it's ridiculous that Huang Yaoshi and Hong Qigong appeared at this time. Duan Zhixing, the Southern Emperor, was born in 1149 and is Duan Yu's grandson. Duan Yu in Tianlong is about ten years older than the historical prototype Duan Zhengyan. So even if Duan Yu in the novel had his grandson ten years earlier than in history, and based on the Shaoxing eight years at the beginning of this article, Duan Zhixing might still be in his mother's womb at this time.

Why, why! Why is it that those who write randomly can write more than 400 chapters, but those who write reasonably are all eunuchs? This book has too many poisonous points, confusing settings, and is laughable!

The author has typically not read the original work. It's pure nonsense. The timeline is completely wrong. It's like the Jiuyang Divine Art is the Jiuyang Divine Art that the wine-fighting monk took over from Wang Chongyang's Nine Yin Manual. See the next volume. I feel that the Nine Yin Manual is more feminine, so I created a martial art that reaches the extreme yang and generates yin and named it Nine Yang Divine Art. Author, you have made it impossible for Huashan to talk about swordsmanship. Where did Wang Chongyang get the Nine Yin Manual? Shaolin is even less likely to have the Nine Yang Divine Art.

The new book, The Doomsday Just Awakened, I beg you readers for your support, both good and evil, not the Holy Mother,