Daliang Pampered

The author's big book is ups and downs without being pretentious, everything comes naturally, it is comfortable to read, and there are many good sentences. I recommend it. I am still very glad that I read this book and fell in love with this author. Before this, the online articles I read were basically popcorn-style. Her articles can be said to have opened the door to a new world for me. Come on! I will always support you❤️❤️

"Something strange came stepping on the moon. It was as beautiful as autumn water, as clear as mountains and rivers, and as dumb as a wooden chicken. I couldn't bear to fall in love with it. I fell in love with it so much." Very enthusiastic about it. Life is very overwhelming. I don't know why this sentence is spoken, but it feels like it speaks to my heart. The author must work hard! Always support you🌹🌹🌹

We met once and separated overnight. It seems to be unkind and unjust, but it is unforgettable.

Author of "Daliang Pampered": Summer Lilac Category: Ancient Romance Ancient Romance Status: Unsigned Number of words read: 20,000 words Commentator: I am Lily Qingyou Introduction: Retirement is not terrible, the terrible thing is that living has no value. My goals in later life are to read more, read good books, write book reviews for good books, and grow up with good books. Book review text: This is a recommendation posted by the author of "Daliang Pampered" in the article scanning circle. The writing is really good, with green lanterns in ancient temples, folk customs, and painted lantern boats on the banks of the Qinhuai River. I also wanted to read it, so I clicked on the book and read ten chapters, about 20,000 words. 1. Impression 4 points/5 points "Daliang's Love" points out the time, place and characters. Good, but not impressive. The following paragraph is my personal opinion and does not affect the quality of the work. Chong: "" means "house". "Dragon" means "snake". The combination of "" and "" means "snakes kept in the house". Original meaning: Domestic non-venomous snake. Escape: 1. To support. 2. Doting. Encyclopedia: 1. Love: competition for favor. 2. Indulgence, favoritism: Don't spoil your children. 3. Concubine: Accept favor. 4. Respect: respect and favor. The cover design fits the theme, heroine, ancient times. Introduction: See the picture below, I won't repeat it. The writing style of the author Summer Lilac is really good, just like her name, the fragrance fills the paper. 2. Opening: 18 points/20 points. The first chapter explains that the heroine is reborn. Unlike other novels, she does not know who her enemy is, so she is not just revenge, she also has to solve the case. It is very attractive to readers. I read ten chapters and roughly guessed that the prince is the most suspicious. This is a main line that attracts readers very much. 3. Setting: 18 points/25 points, The character setting of the female character is perfect. Who is the first male? I have read few chapters. Is he the prince? He is still the one who gave the jade pendant, so let the readers decipher it themselves! The plot setting is lacking. Since I only read the first few chapters, I felt that the plot was too fast and the major events were not described in detail. The setting of the framework is simple, unlike fantasy and immortality, it is just one country and several families. 4. Writing style: 20 points/20 points, One word, great. 5. Plot: 25 minutes/30 minutes There are many characters introduced in the first three chapters, let's take a look: The heroine: Princess Ziyang Ye Waner (death in Chapter 1). His father is the King of Shunan, his mother is the Princess of Shunan (death in Chapter 1), and the heroine is Prince Xiao Qiyi's unmarried good wife. Ye Wan'er's sister is the eldest daughter of the King of Southern Shu and the princess of Jialing. Her husband is the prince Xiao Qiyi and they have a daughter, Xiao Yu. Princess Jialing was already dead when she appeared, and was briefly mentioned in the third chapter. Ye Wan'er's aunt's cousin, cousin Ziyu, the beloved daughter of General Chen Chongqing of the Wei Kingdom, and the fourth prince Wei Wang Xiao Qirui both died before they got married. Both his parents and brothers died in the battle. The heroine is reborn as Mu Yunyin. Her father is the third uncle of the original owner Ye Waner, the official censor Zhongcheng. Her mother is the third aunt of the original owner Ye Waner. Mu Yunyin's second aunt gave birth to Mu Yunlan and Mu Yunzhi. My father also has a half-brother. The first time I watched it, the characters were a bit messy, but when I watched it again, several hidden lines had the opportunity to unfold. With so many people dead, there is no suspense anymore, and the huge conspiracy is being revealed. The plot is fascinating and intertwined, worth watching. Overall score: 85 points. Come on, author! Please keep the number one on the list of new books for girls, and the number one on the list of new books for girls on ancient romance. This is the sixth book review in June 2020. Friends who like it can also pay attention to "Impressions of Reading "The Game of Heaven and Man"" in the elite book review area of ​​the creative circle. The reason for recommending "The Game of Heaven and Man" is that it is fresh, timeless and has a long aftertaste.

This book, to be honest, is very suitable for the ancient situation. After the male protagonist became the emperor, he still had other concubines and children born to other women. Maybe the male protagonist still loved the female protagonist when he was the emperor. But, but, I did only read part of it, and then I went straight to the ending. Maybe I can only read books with a clean male protagonist. In fact, I wanted the second male protagonist to have sex with the female protagonist first, and then with the male protagonist. . . . . . That's fair

Although I like Brother Xuan the most, what I hope most for is the heroine and Brother Baili. Whether I like them or not, the most important thing is that the heroine likes them. Of course, readers like me will be happy with Brother Xuan, and how to slowly cultivate the relationship depends on Brother Xuan's methods 😎 But if the author dares to make the heroine and the prince hate you forever 😆 BTW, does the author prefer Brother Baili or Brother Xuan? 😃

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There are cool breezes in summer and warm books in autumn An ancient dragon in the south and you in the north A stunning face and beautiful dance are not as good as a stroke of your pen Good books, good books, good books

Popularize the titles of the era this book is modeled on (the Southern and Northern Dynasties era) Southern and Northern Dynasties period 1. Call women 1. Niangzi 2. Girl 3. Surname + rank + Niang, such as Li Siniang, 4. Sister-in-law calls her husband's sisters sister-in-law, 5. Family members can call them girls. Two, the slave calls the master's daughter or girl, which is an honorific title. Three, call your sister 1. Sister, 2. Sister, 3. Sister. Four, sister is called mei as she is now, which has the same meaning. 5. During the Southern and Northern Dynasties, there was no separate word for calling sister. The elder sister, in some dynasties, was the mother, such as the Song Dynasty. Sixth, the word "miss" appeared in the Song Dynasty and later, 1. Official prostitute, 2. Prostitute, 3. Palace maid, 4. Concubine of low status. 7. Calls for men: 1. Alang, Xiaolang, 2. Ranking + brother, such as third brother and fourth brother, but there is no one who calls him brother. He calls his elder brother brother, Ah brother, brother Tongjin, 3. Ah + nickname, 4. Ranking + Lang, such as Sanlang, 5. A + ranking, such as Ah Liu, 6. A young man with a noble status can be called a son. 8. It is worth mentioning that the term "gongzi" does not exclusively refer to men of high status. We can also call wealthy women "gongzi", but it is used in the third person. 9. Qianjin in Qianjin Miss was originally used to refer to a man, and it refers to a young and erudite young man. It started from the Liang Kingdom in the Northern and Southern Dynasties in this book. It refers to the 10-year-old prodigy and the Liangguo important minister and writer Xie Zhi who wrote "Ode to the Dongjing". The word "qianjin" used to refer to money was first recorded in "Historical Records. Biography of Lu Buwei", and it refers to Lu Buwei's family wealth. "Historical Records. Biography of Liu Jingshutong" says: "A thousand gold fur is not the armpit of a fox." The story of Wu Zixu's thousand gold in the Spring and Autumn Period is purely a story and has no real written records. Later, there was a written description in the drama "Xue Rengui Gonggui Returns to His Hometown" by Zhang Guobin, a composer of the Yuan Dynasty. After that, the words "Qianjin" and "Qianjin Miss" often appeared in the Ming and Qing calligraphy novels. 10. These are just common titles for the Han people, and they are different for ethnic minorities.

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"Daliang's Pet" is scheduled to be released on V today, August 28th (Friday). I would like to ask everyone for an initial decision today. Thank you in advance.

Why have I only had one ticket for a long time recently? Is it because you have lost the essence? 😁 Okay, after thinking about it, it's because I left less messages in the book review area.

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I clearly remember that I voted once, but then another vote came up. I just cast it regardless of whether it was because I traveled through time again.

The spring breeze and I are both passers-by, and you carry the autumn water to embrace the stars.

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Everything is pure and bright at the beginning, and you can know what kind of grass this bud will become. Come on, the author, and wish you a happy Mid-Autumn Festival in advance.

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The text is gentle but beautiful, the meaning is sad but distant, and thrilling. It can be said that every word is worth a thousand dollars! No matter how hard the road ahead is, as long as you go in the right direction, no matter how bumpy it is, you will be closer to happiness than standing still. Therefore, the author please continue to work hard 👍👍👍

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When I read any work, I am far more picky about the text than the plot. In fact, I don't read much about deep palace themes (I don't know if this is appropriate), but I like the author's words, so I will still finish reading it. Come on, talented woman!

The writing is so beautiful and poetic. The talented and beautiful women are in Xiaoxuanchuang, and the heroes and daughters are in the same heaven. Only then did I see the warm and fragrant nephrite under the prosperous brocade. In a blink of an eye, the turbid waves surged into the sky and the yellow sand swayed. The general's horse is in a hurry, and the idiot's tears are three lines (one more line in the middle of the nose). It is warm and romantic like the national style, and bold and wild like the Han and Tang Dynasties. A big statement: This book is not a god and cannot be tolerated by heaven! I offer you a small ticket to express my gratitude.

Already collected and invested! It's really well written. 1. The title of the book is very interesting, and the introduction is also suspenseful and ancient. 2. The plot is top-notch! It's really great. Peeling away layer by layer, from the rebirth of the princess to the cousin, to the hint step by step, although the scumbag father is a ruthless and unjust image, it seems that it is not that simple, including the prince. At the same time, there is some speculation about the princess's lover in her previous life. Is Chu Huan still alive? Is he the one who saved the heroine? 3. The paragraphs are also very good, neither long nor short, which is suitable for fragmented reading of web articles. 4. The writing style is very good👍, not too delicate, not too rough, the description is spot on, and the characters are well drawn.

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The author seems to have finished the book. As a loyal reader who has followed it all the way, I will write a book review to talk about the beginning and end. It can be seen that the author did his homework carefully before writing this work. The history, geography, culture, etc. Of that dynasty. Accompanying the heroine through the plot, I gained a lot of knowledge by the way. It was a big gain for me, and I also praised the author's rigorous creative attitude. The beginning of this book is quite attractive. It is worth mentioning that this is the first time-travel novel I have officially read. At the beginning, my mind was a mess, and I forgot that I had to read it three times before I figured it out until the dozens of chapters. I think I am quite strict about the literary nature of the work, so I can take the trouble to read it three times. Those chapters are my favorite style. If the death of the former prince is regarded as a node, then I prefer the first half (that is, the former prince is a bit annoying), and the heroine who lives her own life. What about the second half? After entering the palace, the heroine seemed to have lost her freedom. For the big shooter, it feels like It's a bit depressing, and Brother Xuan was also moody at one point. Another reason may be due to gender. I can't stand the too boring love words, but this only represents my personal opinion. As a novel for women, I, an old man, am an uninvited guest. Female readers and Brother Xuan can just like it. The heroine has her cute side, including various little tempers (especially the one who wants to be a doctor, she laughs every time she thinks about it), she has her majestic side, and she also has her smart side. Of course, I am expressing an opinion from a man's perspective. The heroine is not a heartthrob type, one or two It is understandable to fall in love at first sight. Almost all the men with status in the book are fascinated by the heroine. I don't agree with this, but I completely understand it. It is like the domineering president in idol dramas often falling in love with the girl at the front desk. The screenwriter knows that it is unrealistic, but he knows that such a plot has the largest audience. My metaphor may not be appropriate. The heroine is definitely Snow White rather than Cinderella. However, I would like to make a small suggestion. If the author is serious about creating a perfect image, it is enough to arrange a few top suitors. If there are more, it will be counterproductive and make onlookers think it is easy to challenge. I like immersive reading. The description of the environment in the text brings me a lot of enjoyment. This is also an important reason why I prefer the first half of the book. The scenes in the second half are less rendered and inked. Of course, I am not the only reader. The author takes great care of the preferences of most people, which is reasonable. The description of the war in the book is wonderful, which is worthy of praise for the female author. If there can be more ups and downs, interspersed with a few small defeats, it may be more able to arouse the readers' emotions. Brother Xuan in this book is still too wise and courageous. The king of a country is always ready to lead his own conquests, and he is invincible. Of course, as a reader, I am very happy, but the author has worked so hard to write. Don't you think it is a pity not to take this opportunity to torture the readers who are enjoying the success? Finally, some textual suggestions. If the author has another work with ancient themes, he may consider using more pronouns and less auxiliary words, that is, using "he"/"she" more instead of names, especially in the same paragraph, and omitting "", "Zhu" and "Le" as much as possible. Maybe the author is not completely used to it yet. If these three words can be streamlined, the writing style will suddenly appear much more sophisticated. The above is my serious book review after reading the entire book. In a high-level summary, it is true that the flaws do not hide the flaws. I don't know much about the rules here. If the author feels that this book review is still acceptable, he might as well pin it to the top and add more details, hoping to gain more popularity for this beautiful and lovely heroine. Finally, I would also like to thank the author for the return visit. At first, I never thought that female readers would come to my place to support me, and they would support me for several months hhhh Looking forward to the new work.