I Want to Be a Sports Student

1. The bracketed text in the introduction is a bit nonsense, but it has successfully attracted the reader's attention (｢･ω･)｢Hey 2. Paragraph. . It's so long, I can only look up and watch (●—●) 3. The rhythm control is not very good, it should be faster🕐 4. The writing is good, but not smooth enough! Encourage each other

Sure enough, it's dog food in sports writing sheep's clothing! Great cheers and looking forward to the follow-up.

1. The story doesn't start until Chapter 12 or 3, which is a bit slow. 2. There are some typos, but I didn't point them out one by one. 3. Punctuation (weak), too many errors or omissions, some of which I wrote in the book review. 4. The writing style is average and childish. 5. The story is average and has no new ideas. This is the same for everyone. 6. The characters have clear personalities. 7. Fluent language. 8. Clear logic. 9. The word count is still short, so I'll read it later. Collected and looking forward to a return visit.

1. The title and introduction of the book really both work! Realistic style plus relaxed style! It's really interesting. 2. It seems that some of the content is quite good, very sweet (´-ω-`), it is indeed a dog food article hahaha, the dog food article is very good. The writing style is good and the sense of immersion is also good. 3. The paragraphs are neither long nor short, and it is good to read online articles. 4. I would like to give you a little advice. Pay attention to the punctuation marks. I also suggest not to show too many facial expressions. It is not an anime or a dialogue novel, and it can easily cause drama. Come on (✪▽✪) I'm optimistic about you (´-ω-`)

Interesting work, saved! Come on update! Welcome to visit us again!

I have read a lot of sports articles, which are quite insightful, but yours are not enough. I look forward to your follow-up, and I will keep it for now, hh

The writing is very good, I'll save it and read it slowly!

Not bad. Collected. Hope to compete soon😁

Sure enough, this is a dog food article. When is the competition? It's a bit slow 😅😅