God Should Regret

A river of spring water flows eastward, I am a fan and you are worried! ! Keep up the good work, you'll be fattened up so I can kill you! !

I wonder if any of my friends would like to add some supporting character names? It's too deserted. Can I try this to attract some popularity? 😁 If you want to use it, please leave a message. As long as it meets the requirements, I will try to use it.

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Where is my city? Give me back my city😡

I can't accept this son-controlling mother. The author should be born in the 2000s when writing a book like this! Those born in the 80s and 90s probably can't accept these three views. Everyone is an independent individual, not a substitute for others or a continuation of other people's lives. His mother even has to worry about what books her son should read and whether he can play games on his phone. The protagonist is 21 years old. Doesn't the author think there is something wrong with this?

I heard it was written for a girl, so I tried to poison her.

Before trying those seemingly literary writing techniques, let's straighten out the sentences first

Even though it's all a slap in the face, I still have to say that the paragraph is a bit long.

The paragraphs are too long, which greatly affects the reading experience. For a new author, few readers have the patience to buy it. The writing style cannot save this poisonous point. The author must also know, or have heard others ask this question, that you are really handsome when you are stubborn and don't change, but handsomeness cannot be eaten.

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