One Punch Monk Tang Sanzang

I've seen a similar one before

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I have abandoned the book and just finished paying for my monthly pass. The limiter is turned on and the clone's participation in the Lotus Lantern plot is too toxic, so I gave up the trap.

Thinking about it, even if the protagonist is Gou, there is no need to be like this. As the protagonist of Journey to the West, even if some problems are discovered, it is impossible to just solve him casually.

Has the title of this book been changed? ? ?

The author strongly recommends that the plot of the White Dragon Horse be reduced a bit. It is nondescript and affects reading. Especially when you describe her having other emotions towards Tang Monk, I want to abandon the book. The protagonist is Tang Monk, a monk, and the White Dragon Horse is simply a mount. You describe her as more important than Sun Wukong. I feel that many readers are uncomfortable. According to the current setting of your book, I personally think you should It's time to write about how Tang Monk helped Sun Wukong improve his strength, instead of showing it everywhere and making readers think that a mount is better than the senior brother. What's more, it's weird to write a mother-in-law monk, or just let Tang Monk break the ordination, and Monk Hua.

I hope the author will respect the original work and respect Chinese culture, and don't make any mistakes. Immortals and Buddhas may have calculations, but they are all upright. Moreover, in this kind of ideological and cultural things, right or wrong is not obvious, only the standpoint. The protagonist is a human, and it is best to stand from a human standpoint. The three views are different from those of the indigenous people, but they are also of the same origin. Don't write about Buddhas and Jade Emperors, who are like despicable villains. , After all, the Jade Emperor is also the same generation as several saints, a good person who has experienced thousands of years of experience. He is the kind of absolutely good person, a person with noble merits. The Buddha is also a person with great merits. He has less low-level calculations. The powerful rely on the situation and make the best use of the situation. He can never control living beings, just like Wukong who committed suicide by relying on the great opportunity of the innate beings to cultivate immortality and jump on the train. , It didn't take long to reach a very high level and almost live forever, but it also exhausted all the merits. Later, he was suppressed for five hundred years to repay the karma, and then switched to Buddhism and earned great merits. Although he lost his freedom, he really gained immortality. It can be regarded as seeking benevolence and benevolence. Not to mention that Bima Wen's official position is small, or that the position of Qitian Great Sage is empty. You must know that even Erlang Shen did not participate in the Peach Banquet. There are a lot of innate beings in the court, and Wukong is not a rare thing. As Taibai Jinxing said, it is not easy for Wukong to practice, so he should be rewarded with an official position. You must know that many demons such as the Bull Demon King who are stronger than him have no official positions. There is no shortage of innate beings in the heaven, but Buddhism is lacking, so in the end Buddhism accepted him. Unless the system is re-established, the heaven is honest to Wukong. He has to commit suicide! It's like a scholar in ancient times who was good at studying, but his family was in decline. The emperor gave him a fellow Jinshi. It is estimated that you have been studying for many years, but you feel that it is not good and you have to get three yuan. Isn't this the kind of person who doesn't know the heights of the world?

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Little White Dragon

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Tang Monk Saves Wukong

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Little White Dragon

It looked pretty good at the beginning, but it turned out. . . There comes a girly little white dragon, and then there is the holy monk brother. The protagonist feels guilty, distressed, and greasy for several chapters. He punches Tang Monk. The result is this greasy little plot that makes people have goosebumps. I am speechless. . Disappointed

When I read this chapter of this book, I really laughed. Shenji connected Chinese mythology together, and then the second set of magic changed it, becoming the originator of the prehistoric style. And prehistoric fans formed Chinese mythology and Taoist doctrine through various versions of prehistoric novels, fan fiction, and a little bit of their own yy. 🤭🤭🤭Don't laugh, just laugh and say that Honghuangliu is more widely circulated and more deeply rooted in people's hearts than myths, such as the history of the Three Kingdoms and the Romance of the Three Kingdoms. People know more about the Romance of the Three Kingdoms.

I don't know why the current Journey to the West is always linked to the prehistoric school.

The author is getting better and better, the last few chapters are getting better and better, keep up the good work

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It should be similar to this

This book can be changed into "The Struggle Life of the Dragon Knight", "The last six of those who like me are pure", "Monkey, let go of the little dragon girl", "Bajie, leave the pork belly", "Good Wife and Mother - Sha Monk", "Mountain Burial, Cowardly Monkey, Pork Belly, Sweet and Sour Fish to the West",

I feel like the writing is very confusing, a hodgepodge of various elements, the white dragon horse is still a female, and the protagonist One Punch Man doesn't know his own strength. In terms of plot, it is a hodgepodge of normal Westward Journey elements, Westward Journey elements in Westward Journey, and Dark Westward Journey elements. . After reading more than a hundred chapters, the protagonist even went to heaven because he thought the Bone Demon might be related to Sun Wukong. . Absolutely awesome this plot

Some parts of this book have been improved, while others are far from the original. For example, killing the old dragon in Heishui River and killing the three demons in Chechi State are very bad. After killing you, you feel at peace with yourself and feel happy, but what about the Blackwater River God? You threaten the Dragon King of the West Sea, okay, I don't need any black hands, I'll just keep an eye on you, don't make any mistakes, you just need to let me find an opportunity, I will strictly follow the rules, it will be super easy to kill you. For example, if the River God is lured away by someone's magic, I will miss work and fine you your salary, making your hundreds of years of work go to waste. Have you eaten the people's sacrifices? Corruption and bribery, flying swords through hearts and minds. There's a demon king in your river. Can't you defeat him and run away? It is the responsibility of guarding the land, and the dog-headed guillotine serves. There is also Che Chiguo, who guessed that there is a master behind him, and even killed all three of their brothers. What do you want Che Chiguo to do? Doesn't the King of Chechi know that they are monsters? Of course I do. But only the three of them can make it rain. Tang Seng is very capable, but can you be stationed in Chechi Country? Let me tell you, the King of Chechi is much better than the King of Wuji. Otherwise, why do you think the King of Chechi in the original book would protect Tang Seng? It's because he knows everything, but he has no choice. But in this novel, King Chechi is portrayed as a waste. In the original work, the monkey only killed one tiger-powerful immortal, and it was precisely because of this. If the monkey kills all the Deer Power Immortals and the Goat Power Immortals, who will give them rain? No one asked for rain, otherwise they would all die anyway.

It was actually okay in the beginning, but the appearance of the female white dragon immediately changed the taste, making it difficult to watch.

Can I add more points with just two recommendation votes?

The moment Little White Dragon came out, the book deteriorated. Abandoned

Two pictures a day for a better quality🥺🥺

I've read more than 50 chapters, but I have no idea what I'm talking about, and the plot is always lacking. I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up.

My ability is limited, I only cast one, so I'm embarrassed to ask for it, so I'll try more.

I cast five recommendation votes, so I think I can improve it.

At the same time, I was recommended this book and Journey to the West: Fist of the Saint. I only read the introduction. Are they similar stories?