Rebirth: the Rise of Gaowu

The author's writing is good, and his writing is quite skillful. As long as you have the patience to write online articles, you should be able to succeed. However, judging from this book, the outline structure is a failure. Times have changed, but the author still had the same vision as he did two or three years ago, or even earlier, so the pace is too slow and not attractive enough. The author writes about a world with details and localities, but also a macroscopic view. However, Xiaojiazi is too angry, and the protagonist's vision is always in a small area inside. More than two hundred chapters, but surprisingly no contact with the outside world. The macro vision that should have been there before it was put on the shelf was lost by the overly self-proclaimed author. . . Nowadays, when writing a book, rhythm is the key point, and the distance and macro details depend on the author's adjustment. Don't challenge the reader's patience, try to control the progress, this book may not be impossible to counterattack. Come on, don't let my full subscription go to waste🌹

The writing is okay. I guess many people will leave when they see the weapon used by pig's feet. How can a stick break through the defense without its invincible power?

How many chapters have it been? It's a complete meal. It's been two hundred chapters and you haven't become a warrior yet. The beginning is good, but you, a warrior, have never finished the previous copy, right? It's okay to pretend to be two B's, it's endless, I even skipped and watched it and charged fifty chapters, I can't bear it anymore

How many times has this protagonist made rapid progress, and each time he was dumbfounded and surprised. Every time he gained something, he said, "It's more than you have in two lifetimes combined. Did you become an immortal and an ancestor in your last lifetime?"

Author, please be more confident! From the perspective of a bookworm with decades of experience, your novel is already quite broad! An absolute piece of fairy grass!

Haha, now you have no system to write about this kind of high martial arts in the modern world. Are you embarrassed to write about it? Even if you are embarrassed to write it, I am embarrassed to read it!

The writing is really good, I like it so far, and I will support it with six recommendation votes every day for a while.

The writing is really good, cheers to the author. 🙂🙂

I have only read about thirty chapters, and I have a question. When I fight monsters, I always stab them with a stick, so why not use a gun? Isn't a gun more enjoyable than a stick? And I always feel that using a stick to fight monsters is not as good as a gun! A knife, such a sharp weapon!

To be honest, I'm a little annoyed by Ouyang Zhi. Every time she appears, she says harsh words and thinks about crippling people every day. As the heroine, the characterization is really thin.

When I saw the rules of the competition, I thought that this rule was too beneficial to the protagonist. If I were the protagonist and stayed on the outside, the Daqi Mansion came out to fight one by one. If I was afraid that someone would run away, I could call up the people on my side so that no one on the other side could run away. But after looking at the development later, I found out how the protagonist was struggling. Such favorable conditions actually allowed the other party to hold the nose. I was speechless😓 When did you write such an old routine of pretending to be B and getting slapped in the face? This B pretending is too cowardly. The protagonist has an absolute advantage. It is what others say. If others ask you to compare, just compete. Does the protagonist know what it means to be strong? A strong person lets others do things in their own way. Regardless of the protagonist, there is no guarantee that he can win. As long as the protagonist competes, it is a sign of psychological weakness. It shows that the protagonist does not have a strong mentality. The protagonist only needs to go up to challenge the opponent. If they don't give the antidote, they will kill a few of them with heavy blows. It depends on whether they give it to them. This is the most direct and effective method. You can obviously use the simplest and most effective way to solve the problem, but you don't do it. Instead, you take off your pants and fart. Is the author just trying to improve the word count?

I lost the enthusiasm to read it after seeing the introduction.

Anthracene is still good

The writing is pretty good, but in fact the routines are not important, there are only so many of them anyway. The important thing is that the plot should be wonderfully written and the characters described vividly and vividly. Just a good novel.

Chili Sauce, will there be a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

Those whose books are not bad will get bad grades. . . The aroma of wine is also afraid of deep alleys, so do more publicity, boss. Afterwards, listen to the readers' voices and make slight adjustments, which is not just a compromise. After all, online works are aimed at the public. . . Come back, I haven't ordered any subsequent chapters, it's just a reward, it's nothing. . . Work hard, come on, and believe that good books will have good results. . .

Why don't you look passionate? ?

The writing is very good, but I have no idea why the results are so bad?

Opening fan value in the comment area is a double-edged sword. No matter how good the work is, no one will read it or comment on it. . . Even if it is a name, it is still a name

It's well written, but it's too little and not enough to read.

Full subscription plus two monthly passes. I hope the author will finish writing and not let the good book be buried.

It's too awesome, the decoration techniques are too much, just the battle in the body tempering realm is described as mysterious and abnormal, gorgeous, but what about the back? Is the warrior about to overturn mountains and seas, and if he reaches the next level, the sky will collapse and the earth will collapse, destroying the world?

It's very well written, the author should keep at it

The writing is pretty good, but the heroine doesn't appear until more than a hundred chapters in. It's the first time I've seen this happen.

A heroine is suddenly inserted after more than a hundred chapters? The subplot is baffling?

I think the writing is quite good, but the introduction should dissuade many people. I actually didn't want to read it when I saw the introduction at first, but I came in because I liked the subject of high martial arts. I suggested that the author change the introduction. There are not many paid chapters to be updated, please subscribe to support them all. So far, I haven't seen anything too toxic, and the plot is quite attractive. I'll give you eight monthly passes every day, so keep writing.