My Junior Sister Has Delusions of Being Persecuted

After reading the article, the writing is good. If I have to make some comments: the description of the characters could be more detailed and the sense of immersion might be better. Keep up the good work and keep updated 🙏

In one moment, there are a million possibilities

Come on, it's very well written. I suggest you describe it in more depth to make it better.

The writing is good! Like it very much!

The writing is delicate and the words are fluent, keep up the good work＾0＾~

The writing is good, keep up the good work

The writing is great, the narration is very smooth, and the paragraphs are good. A small immature suggestion, you can add a little more character description. Too much description is not good, too little is not good, you can polish the pen. Come on, come on, come on

It's very well written, please update it.

Since ancient times, heroes have emerged from youth

The plot, creativity, and characters are all great! It just needs more writing on the environment and character interaction, come on!

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Why have I stopped writing so many books recently?

Very punctual, two chapters updated a day