Kamen Rider of DC World

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Brother, your writing is not good. It's so messy. You didn't explain anything clearly. You just skipped ahead and I'm confused.

Come on, author, you'd better not mix in some monsters from Kamen Rider, otherwise it will be awkward. I really want to write about fighting against fake riding monsters. I can get a reward, such as a time travel card, and go to the world of knights.

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After reading it, I really feel that my writing is not good, and the author needs to practice.

I was confused when I read it. The author may have a clear idea of ​​the direction of the story, but the personal feelings expressed were a bit messy. Some places lacked pre-positioning and felt a bit sudden. The author knew why he wrote it this way, but he didn't feel it was expressed to us. Well, I really can't describe it.

Tell me what you think. The main character is completely disorganized. To uphold justice, he does not know what kind of justice to uphold. He has no opinions of his own and works completely in accordance with the tasks issued by the system. When we look at Knight, we mainly want to see if he has the same beliefs as Kamen Rider. It didn't feel that good as a result.

The author should practice his writing. The writing is too messy and there is no single thread running through it. It feels like he just writes whatever comes to mind. I feel that the results of this book will not be very good. If you persist, just practice writing.

There is no main line, and the whole process is running dungeons. The protagonist's personality is like the DC version of Deadpool. Too much nonsense.

Has the protagonist killed anyone in DC now? In fact, I think the no-kill concept in the DC universe is particularly retarded. Superheroes are not allowed to be above the law. This is okay, but they always let others lead the way. The criminals ran out as soon as they were caught and committed crimes again. Who is responsible for the citizens who died? The best thing is not to kill him the first time, but to kill him if he commits a crime the second time. It sounds like he has been given a chance, right? Who is it to blame him for not cherishing it? I think it's better for the protagonist to adopt this concept. After all, the protagonist is a time traveler. DC's no-kill philosophy is quite morbid, especially Batman's

I have some suggestions. If you are a novice author, if you want to write about the combination of Kamen Rider and local power, then you can find some novels of the same type to learn from. For example, DC's Knights, that book is very good after chapter 200. You can learn from it and then write your own style.

There are too many typos and the writing feels a bit messy, making it confusing to read.

The content is really messy. I suggest you sort it out after you finish writing the current test paper.

The writing is so messy, a mess

This book. . . Only those with a deeper understanding of DC will be able to read it. If you don't know enough about DC, you will definitely be confused and don't know what is going on.

The author is so confusing that I can't understand it and can only abandon it.

Firstly, it is not very friendly to people who have not watched Kamen Rider. Secondly, it jumps too much between paragraphs, and the thinking is too active. There are also words and things the characters say and do. Sometimes you don't know what the plot is about without carefully distinguishing it... It feels very confusing.

The more I watch it, the more boring it becomes, with no sense of immersion at all.

Not even doing daily routine, running to the set all the time

I have two questions for the author: Why is this protagonist so weak? Doesn't Kamen Rider have a trait that goes against his will? Just believe in what you can do, and you will definitely be able to do it, no matter how unscientific it is, and the protagonist's Kamen Rider is only great in the first few pictures, but not at all in the later ones. If you make TV or cartoons, the second question is, what story are you describing? I don't know much about this type of story, so tell me about it.

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We don't know what the author wrote, and we don't dare to ask anything.

DC is scary, I admit it, but it's scarier than Marvel, I don't agree

Kamen Rider is so slow to transform, will he be beaten when he encounters The Flash or something?

Personally, I think the Imperial Cavalry should not be able to arm-wrestle with Manhattan, and the Demon King should be comparable to Manhattan. It is not bad. We can discuss it.

I was poisoned from the front. I didn't look at the back. I beat a vampire (not a big boss yet) until I was half dead. It created a hidden danger. I was stunned but didn't transform. If I can't bear it anymore, you can try it if you have high poison resistance.

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It's so confusing, the protagonist doesn't know what to say

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