Covering the World, I Am Invincible

It's too watery compared to other Zhetian fans.

It's too watery. The word count is always low. I've written 10 chapters of a secret realm but haven't reached the most exciting part yet.

It's well written, but a little watery

I agree with the previous brother, there is no need to care too much about Ye Fan. If you, a time traveler, insist on marrying Ji Ziyue, it would be too poisonous. Isn't the demon princess bad? Three or two big cats and kittens of the Qing Emperor's lineage are equivalent to picking up the emperor's soldiers for free. If you don't value this, there are plenty of choices, such as Xiantian Dao Fei, Yaochi Saint, Zhongzhou Princess, etc. (Actually, I really want to see Yaochi Saint. This one highlights a mystery in the early stage, but unfortunately there are too few scenes in the later stage). On the other hand, you don't have much affection or sense of belonging to this family. If you keep a low profile and restrain your family, the situation will be much better. Just give it some protection. Ye Hei is not really evil. Most of his time in the early stage is either collecting resources or being hunted. If you don't mess with him, he really won't have time to deal with you. And even if you have a system, if you exchange things from the system when the Immortal Road is opened, you will definitely not be able to fight alone. Ye Hei can at least provide an extra helper. Anyway, before the dark turmoil, your two fundamental interests were highly consistent. And it is difficult for the Holy Body to become an emperor. The protagonist has a lot of time. When Ye Fan can become an emperor, are you still not confident enough to reach the level of the Emperor of Heaven and separate the mark of Tianxin? We are all time travellers, but we still have to focus on becoming an immortal

Those who write about Zhetian Fans will all be like Emperor Chendong. He was cursed and had bad luck in his old age, so he committed suicide.

Why must Ye Fan be regarded as a life and death enemy? After all, that was just something in the original work. Now that you have traveled through time, you can change everything! You can give Ye Fan some help when he is weak, such as telling him how to get home, and then avoid becoming enemies with Ye Fan, and Ye Fan will never cause trouble for the protagonist. You have to decide a life and death enemy for yourself in advance for some things in the original work, right? Not to mention that behind the scenes of this life-and-death enemy is a woman who is about to become a fairy. A time traveler, faced with so many precious opportunities and so many beautiful women, has to decide a life and death enemy for himself in advance for something that has not happened to him in the original novel. Is that what ordinary people can think of?

If you play the system in Zhetian, if you don't cultivate your mind, you will be beaten to death, right?

Can the main character's name be Wang Teng? Isn't it strange that he uses this and that from time to time? It would also make readers uncomfortable.

Ye Fan was so scared before he came, and he was still scared to death after he came.

Zhe Tian read some, and couldn't stand the ruthless characters. What bothered me the most was the pretense of mystery. My impression of the protagonist was okay. Author, just follow your own ideas. Cut off when you need to, and win over when you need to. Don't just brag about some ruthless person like in other novels.

This made me laugh so hard. Have you seen "Shading the Sky"? What's the conflict between your time traveler Wang Teng and Ye Hei? Don't talk about killing the whole family, you fucking time traveler, prophetic and systematic, you can kill the whole family, you can die. Anyone who talks about earning the emperor is a fucking idiot! In the Golden Age, there are only four people who can compete for the throne of the Great Emperor, and they are all in an alternative realm of enlightenment. Gai Jiuyou's dark turmoil will definitely come forward and he will die! Chuanying and Ning Fei, one because of the disappearance of Heavenly Court and the other because of the Immortal Queen, will not become emperors because of their grudges. Therefore, the emperor in this life must be cowardly and stubborn, and he is a different kind of enlightened Golden Crow. After that, the three people are the best teammates in the penalty area, entering the fairyland, and God.

I found that the authors of Zhetian fandom have misunderstandings. Ji Ziyue is just cute and cannot be considered the most beautiful beauty. Yan Ruyu, An Miaoyi, Qin Yao, Yao Xi, Yaochi Saint, and Wu Ren are all more beautiful than Ji Ziyue. If they are cuter, Ji Ziyue and Xiao Nannan are right.

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Is Wang Teng very powerful? He actually said he had the qualifications of a great emperor?

Originally, traveling through Wang Teng was a good starting point. After all, he was the first of the younger generation in the early stage and the first to become a powerful being, but why did he add a system? If you write infinite flow, it is understandable to add a system, but it is just the same as Zhetian. If the system is nondescript, it is better to replace the system with a magic weapon.

Emperor? ? ? It was nothing to Zhe Tian, ​​even a newly-established Immortal Emperor could be crippled by a drop of blood and turn into a corpse Immortal Emperor. A great emperor is of no use. Using the Immortal Emperor directly is just the starting point. I wonder if there are many realms above that would be better? ? There is no use in building a broken system

The representative who died at the sight of the light became agitated as soon as it was put on the shelves 🤓🤓🤓

It's better to keep the protagonist's name consistent

Never lick Ye Fan, better step on him

You don't even need to read the content, just read the introduction. If this book becomes popular, I will eat the keyboard during the live broadcast. The deeply rooted characters in "Shading the Sky" have been belittled by you in such a way. To be honest, are you really the one who is hiding the sky? Especially my ruthless emperor. The author of Ten Thousand Harmonious Characters in the Heart has your own taste

I don't know why the author keeps emphasizing fate