Dreaming Back to Shanghai

What should I say? First, the plot is too slow and messy. Second, the characters are not clearly drawn and not eye-catching. I only saw chapter 15 and couldn't read it anymore. I hope the next book can be corrected. This one is useless

I saw more than a dozen pictures and couldn't bear it anymore! Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it! The underworld traveled through time and became a good person! No poison, no husband! Carry the sack! 😰 In a cannibalistic society, if you have plans to kill people, you have to pretend to be a good citizen! To have normal views on ordinary people, and to repay evil with evil, this is a saint! Normal people can't do it!

There are a lot of boring plots, the layout is too small, I thought it would be exciting, but Wu Momo's family only wrote dozens of chapters, but the plot is dragging and not interesting.

If you are a villain and a killer, just kill him directly, you are still blabbering.

I can't read this book, so I suggest you don't waste your time.

It was very boring to read. I couldn't even finish the free chapters 😅

It's a very good subject, and the author wrote it as "Hedinghonghong"

I haven't watched it yet, but from reading the comments, it seems that the character of the protagonist does not fit the killer's setting. The killer must be decisive in killing and have a sinister personality. He will kill you when he says to kill you, and he will never let you live until the next day.

It's a real pitfall. After I subscribed, I subscribed to an unknown number of articles and I didn't explain the method or situation. The protagonist just let people act like a fool. Every time I encountered a dangerous kidnapping, the people around me reversed, reversed, and reversed again. After that, the protagonist came to the rescue. There were quite a lot of words. .

I thought it was food and grass, but it was still too bad.

I remember reading a book many years ago where the male protagonist founded a gang in Shanghai. He seemed to have opened a foreign bank. He kept acquiring warehouses and shops in Shanghai and secretly renovated them in preparation for the Battle of Songhu. The same happened later in Nanjing. I forgot the title of the book.

Author, please write an outline first when writing a book, and then fill in the content! Don't let this serious discrepancy between names and content happen again.

It's boring to write in small places, it tests your writing skills. Great writing, River Crab is with you. It's too saucy to open the Republic of China literature now

The story is good, but the knowledge is not very good, so I wrote it half-heartedly. Newcomer! Sometimes knowledge is more important than writing skills.

Support as always, a new week and a new beginning, stay tuned, boss!

Interesting! Collected! Take your time and watch! Keep updating! Welcome to visit us again!

The garbage is unclear. A lot of messy writing.

An introduction. I have finished reading the book. Bye.

Congratulations on the launch, keep up the good work!

This is not a killer, this is an Erbi, or a Erbi killer 😴

It spread quickly enough. I haven't been here for two days and it's almost 100,000 words. I need to give it your full support 😁

Congratulations on the launch, subscribe and take a look🙂