Dawei Tianlong Tang Sanzang

At the beginning, I suggest the author revise it. Tang Sanzang's Dharma name is Xuanzang. I think everyone knows this. The so-called Tang Sanzang or Master Tripitaka. First of all, Tripitaka refers to a monk who is proficient in Tripitaka, Commentary and other Tripitaka. Tripitaka is equivalent to the modern academic title. The so-called Tripitaka of Tang means a Tripitaka master who is proficient in Tripitaka or a Tripitaka master from Tang Dynasty. In modern terms, it means Academician X from China or Academician X who came to the United States. His surname is not Tang, let alone Sanzang (ー_ー)!!

Tang Seng is the abbreviation of Tang Dynasty monk. Fahai is the son of Pei Xiu, a famous prime minister in Tang Dynasty, and his common name is Pei Wende.

You are so bold and monstrous, you dare to do whatever you want with your skills! 🤘The mighty heavenly dragon, 👌World Honored Ksitigarbha! 🤙Great Law Mantra, 🙏Prajna Buddhas! ✋Prajna Bama coax! 🐉The flying dragon is in the sky! 👉Go!

What did I find? Keep it, keep it

Brave author! I can tell at a glance that you don't update enough! Dawei Tianlong😡

Let's talk about it after reading a few chapters The plot is funny, but I feel that the author's writing skills are a bit lacking or his experience is a bit lacking. There are some paragraphs that feel better if they are omitted or not written, such as afterwords, narration, and some inner thoughts of the characters (I just didn't find the feeling at all for this). The plot is okay, but being funny for the sake of being funny makes me a little uncomfortable. Personally, I prefer serious comedy. For bookworms who want to get into the game, I suggest you not read it as a serious novel (literally), but if you read it as a sketch script or directly imagine the animation, it will be unexpectedly interesting as the funny animation of Journey to the West (The Legend of the First Era?) That was shown on TV before.

Character positioning in the original work of "Journey to the West" Tang Sanzang: a bastard who likes to give away people's heads Sun Wukong: a powerful carry, and MVP is of course (the original work was seriously lax, except for I have tried my best a few times, but basically I have a flat A record) Zhu Bajie: farting to add to the wind, a gangster who likes surrender Sha Wujing: a gangster who likes fishing

I always feel that Fahai's inner demons are a bit painful. At the end of the movie, Fahai should have solved his inner demons and become a Buddha, but this is written... (How about a parallel world directly)

I coded and coded and coded, and finally I have coded tens of thousands of words. I am still slowly saving the manuscript. Well, I am still... A few months away from my goal.

After reading six chapters, I want to delete the book and stop reading it. I feel that I have no desire to read it (probably because I am lazy)

Dad, why haven't you signed a contract yet?

Damn, hurry up and apply for a contract.