Anticipate the Trajectory of Basketball

"Foreseeing the Trajectory of Basketball" Wow, violent basketball is a very eye-catching idea of ​​sports writing. I wonder if the current sports writing has written all the creative ideas that can be written, and the author came up with this idea in a flash. It is very good. I actually read Chapters 76 to 80. The first time I just watched the small climax from 77 to 80, I was a bit confused. It was only when I saw the four words "violent basketball" in Chapter 80 that I suddenly realized it. The newcomers from the East defeated the strong players from the traditional basketball powers in a unique sports situation, performing a "Huo Yuanjia in the basketball world". And this strong man is deeply influenced by Eastern culture. It can be seen from his initial clothing that such a fusion of characteristics will make it difficult to create a character, but the author grasped it well. If there was no description of the emperor's memories in the middle, it would be a failure, that is, a nondescript character setting. But the author obviously thought deeply about each character in the novel and handled it appropriately. With the Emperor digging a memory pit, more plots and stories can be developed in the future. This book has a slight flaw in that it has already limited the already small readership of sports genre, and used "innovation" to further limit readers' preferences. It is more than enough to write about games at the author's level. Perhaps it is the author's own hobbies in basketball and literature that made this book exist. Story: There is the young man's hard work, his struggle in the face of power, his love for his little sister, and a different kind of Chinese pride. The protagonist should have a better display stage in the future, which requires the author to bring more novel plots to readers. It doesn't need to be described, which is fun in itself. Structure: More than eighty chapters have reached the critical point of development. If you continue to play, it will make people feel happy. However, the transition before and after the climax is a bit uneven, and the ending is very good, leaving a suspense foreshadowing, with multiple supporting characters' language and inner descriptions to explain the plot. But compared to the subsequent transitions, the transition before the climax seems sloppy. What a "cage basketball court" looks like may need to be described with some pen and ink. The psychological changes of the protagonist and the heroine before the game. If the protagonist does not speak, the environment can be used to highlight his thoughts. In order to let readers keep up with the rhythm, a little more water is necessary. Creativity: Full marks, the protagonist with strange bones is as good as his creator. But genre limits the use of such creativity. Expect more, not better creativity. The enjoyment is the same, but it's hard to be consistently satisfied. Writing style: The narrative is smooth and the description is clear. Because it is a sports genre combined with a fighting style, it takes up more space in the description of movements and expressions. It is suitable for readers who love basketball, are patriotic and have rich emotions, because the emotions hidden in this article are very delicate, and you can get emotional even if you are not careful. Rhythm: The rhythm is very good when viewed paragraph by paragraph. Short sentences, simple, easy to understand, and bright descriptions are very suitable for this genre and imagination. However, there is a lack of "contrasting description" when the roles change. That is, when the emperor and the protagonist change respectively, "more" words can be added from the perspective of spectators, such as the comments of the two teachers. Update: The book has been signed, and it is estimated that there are about 30 chapters left. It will be available on the shelves after several consecutive waves. I hope the author can save the manuscript quickly. This kind of writing style and rhythm are likely to be "broken" once the reader stops (like drinking or bragging when drunk). It feels so exciting, and it's hard to get back up after you stop sobering up) Perception: If you read it from the first chapter, at a normal reading pace, this is a good article that you will still find unfinished after reading 300 chapters. The subject matter is new and creative, and it reads very smoothly. But we can't stop. If the author has saved 100,000 manuscripts, it is a wise decision to collect this book. Summary: Take chestnuts out of the fire. It is difficult to produce high-quality works in the sports genre, but judging from the lists of other book sites, it is also a new direction. I hope that the author will continue to write and bring readers a lasting reading experience. This book is like a roasted chestnut stall in an alley late at night. The owner works hard to run it, but only a few lucky gourmets can taste the taste. I suggest that the boss first set up a mobile stall in front of a supermarket, so that you don't have to worry about repeat customers. Even if you are under pressure from the urban management, you must persist until you can open a chain. The boss has this skill, and you have the chestnuts in your hands, so you can sell them well anywhere.

The description of basketball confrontation and technical details in this article is relatively detailed. It can be seen that the author still has a good reserve of basketball knowledge. The writing is concise and smooth, and the quality of campus sports writing is also excellent. In terms of gold finger settings, the ability to predict can also help improve technical movements. This design is very interesting. While it is awesome, it also makes people look forward to whether there will be other development methods in the future. At this point, this is already a relatively excellent sports article, but in my opinion there is still a gap between it and Fengshen. The most concentrated problem is the first battle at the beginning of the chapter. First, after being bullied, I didn't get a slap in the face. Second, it failed to take the opportunity to shape the image of the protagonist and failed to show the competitive spirit. I'll just give you a few examples of other competitive themes - "Green Green". In the opening chapter, the male protagonist plays wild football and makes bad moves on the opponent, relying on his skills to ignore it. After the game, he was ridiculed that the former genius is now playing football, which brings out the background of the male protagonist and reflects the spirit that he and his old coach love football and never admit defeat even if their future is in doubt. The opening plot of "The Prince of Tennis" is defiant and provocative, with Ryoma performing fancy tricks, creating an image of Ryoma as a arrogant young genius. The beginning of "The Master" shows Ye Xiu specializing in "Glory", having superb skills and loving Glory. On the other hand, there are almost none of yours. Even after I read the next few chapters, I can hardly remember what the characteristics of your protagonist are. Apart from being handsome, you are just the carrier of Gold Finger. Don't get the soul. Looking back, I felt that the plots were too thin and lacked a sense of design, and the pretense and slap in the face did not seem round and full enough. For example, if I were to write the beginning, there would definitely be a few more twists and turns. For example, if the male protagonist has the upper hand in the opening scene, this shows that the male protagonist has good skills or is a bit clever. Then the opponent gets angry and commits a foul, and the male protagonist suffers. The male protagonist has a long memory to counterattack. This can show that the male protagonist is resourceful, refuses to admit defeat, and hates such ungrateful people. Then he kills the opponent, and the male protagonist's superpower awakens. Others told the male protagonist to stop fighting, but he was bloody-minded and refused to admit defeat. He persisted even if he was a little dizzy. The first appearance of the superpower is a bit disturbing, but the male protagonist is at a disadvantage and the other side is taunting him. The male protagonist has mastered superpowers and shows off his awesomeness. Probably so. Including the subsequent school team game, the performance of the audience was too abrupt and exaggerated. It would be better to have a gradual change. Of course, overall it's pretty good. Good luck, author.

Great book about sports, slowly gain weight before reading it

It's very good. It's rare to see books with this kind of subject matter. I hope you can work hard. One day this book will come out, and the writing style is good and it is step-by-step. Alternate layers.

[Personal comment, please delete if you don't like it] Looking at the title of your book, and then looking at the content of your book, I feel that the author's thoughts are a bit dangerous. T_T Brother, do you really think violent basketball is legal? I don't know much about basketball, but the author does.

Is this how the book review section is built?

How can you play basketball if you have the ability to foresee five seconds? Be a football goalkeeper! You are invincible!

Everything was good in the beginning, but the violent basketball confused me. When the book gets a little bit of traffic, there will definitely be a lot of people who will find fault with it, such as why they didn't call the police, and there are too many narrations for the audience, which is a bit annoying to watch. I always love you, and having too many children makes me feel a little bit watery. The free chapter doesn't matter. Overall, it's lenient and the writing is okay.

It looks a bit embarrassing, self-titled article 😅

Very interesting setting, good vote.

I just want to ask, what does having the ability to predict have anything to do with suddenly having top basketball skills?

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The first three chapters are just random writing. This kind of gangster who played basketball in school has no background and has been killed long ago. The author is really imaginative.

There are more than 200 comments in the comment area. One person has commented more than 100 times. Do you know why? You are too stuck. You have written more than 500,000 words and are still playing on the school team. Chapter 300 is almost over. The opponent you encounter is a quasi-NBA team. You have to write a million words before entering the NBA to play.