The Legend of Jiuyou and Three Realms

It's a story about the descendants of dragons from another world. The protagonist's surname is Ye, and he should be from the human race. As for the three golden chapters, the origin of the world and the identity of the protagonist are explained very clearly in a very quick way, but there is no shining point. Long Batian was reborn unexpectedly and became a run-down young master. The story unfolded from the adoring little maid to the plot of breaking off the engagement, slapping the matchmaker who broke off the engagement, and then explaining that he was tricked by the villain. With the help of the butler, he slowly plotted a great cause... This is the content of three chapters, and it seems to be a familiar unfolding, so I said it started very well and evenly. I peeked at the next few chapters and found out that there are three lower realms under the original Three Realms of Nine Netherworlds, which means that the protagonist mainly moves on the Blue Star after rebirth, which means that at least in the early and middle stages, he will not be able to return to Nine Netherworlds. In this way, it indicates that the rhythm of beating people in the face all the way with magical skills and wit is very refreshing, and it is a style that is very pleasing to the readers of Xinwangwen. Although the plot is old-fashioned, it cannot conceal the author's intentions, such as using fried hair to describe the little maid; describing in detail the foreshadowing of drunken immortal wine and setting the protagonist to drink to death, all of which reflect this intention. Author, your title is revealing. But this is not a bad thing. At least the author's outline is stable and clear. New web articles need this kind of speed and rhythm. The explosions erupted one after another, and the waves of continuous slaps in the face were so refreshing that it was so satisfying. This is different from the foreshadowing and explosion in the eyes of old bookworms. It is inevitable that some people will complain about this, so please don't pay attention to these voices. The so-called new wine in a bottle does not only refer to the innovation of the plot. Aren't the plots of so many martial arts novels all about revenge and fighting all the way to the big BOSS to dominate the world? Stylistic innovation, how to quickly and skillfully develop the already laid out story to make it enjoyable, is exactly the overall trend of new online writing today. However, please note that this is a fantasy genre that has been written by too many people. I have two small suggestions: First, write the details of the outline directly to chapter 300 and then come back to burst out the code. Otherwise, if you drift a little bit later, readers will feel that you are in trouble and give up supporting you. Second, try to carve out some unique characters, and don't make all the characters look like popular faces. For example: for example, the little maid can be very sinister when no one is around, for example, the housekeeper is actually involved in the conspiracy of the Ye family's downfall, etc. (Maybe you have already thought about it in a place that was not coded later) I boldly imagine that if the book breaks out to more than 10,000 words every day, and it can still maintain this speed after signing the contract, it will definitely become popular. It's hard to say at the starting point, but it will definitely be popular on other book sites. Nowadays, most of the skilled vest masters use this routine. Story: Blue Star in the Nine Nether Realms (approximately the setting of the feudal dynasty of the earth), there are gods, demons, immortals, ghosts, and fantasy. The protagonist is a dragon batian (a descendant of the dragon clan, born in the human race, the emperor of the three realms, reborn as a young master, and will eventually return to the top, the true dragon batian, no doubt). The power is gradually recovering, and he relies on wit, strategy, and force to defeat him all the way. What is the operation? Just be happy and that's it. Structure: The structure of the first three chapters is very complete, and the inheritance is perfectly matched, with no mistakes or accidents. The rapid narrative development is a major feature of this book. Creativity: There is a certain pseudo-intention about the past of key items, such as Drunk Immortal Wine, and key characters, such as the matchmaker, but with only the first three chapters, I can see that the author can give up unnecessary descriptions. The world setting is very complete, and no flaws can be seen. It just depends on whether new things and adventures are added later. Writing style: cool writing, simple writing, whatever you want to call it. But for me, this is an addictive, relaxing and enjoyable reading style. Rhythm: Bright rhythm, rapid development, and bursts of cool points without any sloppiness (the cool bits include the ones that readers can guess, even if they can guess, it is cool. If the readers of the new online novel can't guess, it is very cool.) Update: At present, the frequency of updating this style of writing is not reached. The author is big Olivier, if it is impossible for black people to carry the coffin, I will hallucinate the BGM in my ears. Perception: This feeling is like when you go back and watch "Westward Journey" or other old movies and books. Although you probably still remember the plot, you can always see the "freshness". In the freshness, you feel extremely comfortable and refreshing, "Oh, so that's it, it's a classic!". General comments: It's an old man's statement to see an old person at the age of three. This era needs the inheritance of fantasy in this style. The author dares to think and act, but he still has to work hard. The style of writing determines whether this book will advance or retreat. I can only comment on the first three chapters so much. I think the author should let me watch the climax before commenting, but he chose the first three chapters. This book is like returning to my hometown after 20 years away from home, and seeing the old shop in the alley of my hometown, the familiar owner and the familiar little wontons, except that the sign at the front of the shop has been replaced by "Shaxian Snacks" that has been opened in big cities. After taking a bite, it still tasted like when I was a kid. It was a nostalgic aftertaste, but it also had a little more freshness: When I went there, I suddenly remembered that my hometown is a small town called "Shaxian".

I went back to my hometown and there was no internet. I also want to take this opportunity to review the upcoming outline. I don't know how to be a eunuch, believe me.

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