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The writing is very good and the content is also very exciting, but it is too little and not enough to read.

It's amazing. It's rare to see such a detailed article, but it must have killed tens of millions of brain cells! Come on.

It feels like it will become darker, 🤭🤭, the familiar routine feels familiar, hahahaha

The advantage of the first-person description is that it is delicate. The tragic life experience of the heroine is described in the beginning, and it makes people feel more sympathetic. After reading the following, it is probably the love-hate entanglement between the ugly duckling and other people's children. I blindly guess that it may be due to family reasons, leading to various misunderstandings between the two. Will the male partner take over? I hope the author can create a more exciting story. It's great. Come on.

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The descriptions are very delicate, not as delicate as those of online articles Emotional and soothing, like flowing water Just a glass of warm wine that needs to be savored I am optimistic about you, come on If there are any shortcomings, the long flow may not attract impetuous online readers.

Great reviews! Envy😁

Thank you for your hard work, author. Good night.

A master at staying up late, providing warmth late at night. The author should also pay attention to rest while typing. Good health is the capital of revolution.

Suitable for a warm afternoon, pouring a cup of tea and reading slowly.

Is it a female channel? I just found out 😜

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Come on! Great writing, bookmarked

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They say first person writing is bad, I'm screwed

Why is the heroine so pitiful! Feeling distressed

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The writing style is really childish, please work harder. Also, remove the parentheses)

The tragic life experience of the heroine is explained at the beginning, which makes people feel sympathetic. I have known the male protagonist since childhood, and after being warmed by him, I fell deeply in love with him. An unexpected reunion began, and a love-hate entanglement with him began. The plot is pretty good, but there is too little psychological description of the characters. Too much dialogue. There are also many words about water, so the detailed description should be practiced

One chapter is about 14 pages on average. It's awesome. I admire you.

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It's so eloquent, every word is so precious, and its connotation is as deep as the sea. It makes people fall into despair. Why don't I write it down?

I feel like I am a bit narcissistic or overconfident - I feel that the work I wrote is great, but of course I have changed it. Chapter 1 of "Unyielding Battle" (the rest has not been changed, it is not good-looking) I have changed all the short stories before the diary of "There is no reason", but the rest has not been changed

Good evening, I'm going to read a book

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The boss has started another update. I thought you had to wait for two days 🤓

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