I Didn't Expect That I Would Cheat in Novice Village.

Author, please stop writing. I suggest you start a new book. You wrote too many poisonous points. Normal book (normal). Your word count recommendation vote must be at least 10,000. Just a few hundred for you...

The apprentice I wrote about it feels like a real failure.

It shouldn't be that poisonous. I think it's still generous. I don't know what you think. It feels like a nostalgic feeling, and the writing style is also good. It's pretty good. It's pretty good.

The writing is okay, but it's a bit watered down. Is it necessary to write so much about the competition? You only wrote so much about just one competition. What about the sect competition?

If it were your protagonist,...

Why does this introduction look so familiar? Answer: NPC series I am not! I don't! Don't talk nonsense! Answer:……

It's so ethereal, it feels so unreal, it's hard to feel like the protagonist has traveled through time rather than bragging😅😅

It's well written, but one paragraph is too long, which makes my eyes tired.

So I'm afraid that you'll travel through time and space, and you won't do anything, just want to eat rice.

Just because of this name, I will poison you

The plot of this game is also too long.

Jump directly from chapter 50 to chapter 150 to start reading.

Ichichan~ Is there a female protagonist in this book? (:[___]←Waiting for reply

I can't break sentences. It's too long and hard to read.

The subject matter seems to be okay, except that it is a little watery and the sentences are just broken (face covering). A dialogue between two characters can be disconnected here. Moreover, the description of the actions after the conversation can be divided into sections here. Although it is still one person, it can be divided. Maybe because of the author's computer coding, I feel that one paragraph is not so long, but when we look at it on mobile phones, it only takes two paragraphs to occupy one page 😅 Generally speaking, in addition to the description of the setting, which is longer, usually two or three sentences can be divided into paragraphs, and the actions after the character's dialogue can also be broken into sentences. The stack of conversations looks so uncomfortable. .

... The subject matter is not bad, and the writing style is also good, but the result is a completely funny style. . . Carefree? You can look at the Drinking Sword Immortal ☞ The sword rides on the wind to slay demons in the world. There is wine and joy in the world. Without wine, I will be drunk. I drink up the rivers in one drink. I drink the sun and the moon again. I can't get drunk from a thousand cups. I am the Wine Sword Immortal. ☜ It's cool, it's cool, but why did you become Doudou? . . ("▔□▔) Can't bear to look at it