
Training the Heavens, Starting with Akame Ga Kill!
调教诸天从斩瞳开始
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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The protagonist is an ugly, short and fat woman whose output depends entirely on brainwashing. At the end of every world, all women die. Is this book a good read? The author is here to take revenge on society.
I don't know what the author's brain circuit is, but he set up a short, fat and ugly protagonist to make Goldfinger more difficult? I don't see what's so difficult about it. Is it just because there are a few more entries that it's more difficult to clear? And the author, you said you want to retain readers. I read most of the comments and complained about the short, fat and ugly protagonist. I haven't seen you change it. If you don't change it, forget it. It doesn't matter what the protagonist looks like. Don't mention it. I will treat him as a mosaic. But why do you keep mentioning that the protagonist is ugly? I read novels just to see the protagonist being ugly?
The main character is short, fat and ugly. If you are fat, can't you try exercising? To be reasonable, you don't have to worry about income or the loyalty of your subordinates. How about taking some time to try to exercise? It's not pleasant to go to bed if you don't have enough physical strength, not to mention that you have to accept one person after another. Can you bear it if you are not physically strong enough? The other party's attributes are nearly a hundred times yours, boss. Although it is possible to adjust various attributes, the result is often stupid, or the author limits it. In the first few chapters, I used golden fingers to push down the wall. After two chapters, I said that the door was too hard to open. I just asked the black people. Can you use a golden finger to maximize the efficacy of the medicine, but in the next chapter it will be said to have serious side effects? To get rid of the side effects of the medicine, it's not impossible to operate it, so you have to reduce your strength? Is this still cool? The most unbearable thing is all kinds of murders of girls. The author really has a problem with his views. The tool-man lady who followed me for nearly a hundred chapters was given a lunch box in just one chapter? And it's basically meaningless. Shame on others? Even your own protagonist? So what's the point of writing a novel for you? Someone has to look at the profits. Wouldn't it be nice to write something about a normal character? Why bother with money? Some people say that this kind of protagonist is close to life and real. I really don't know what to say to you. If you really want to be true, it's not enough to be beaten by society. Do you have to find yourself uncomfortable in other people's fantasies in a novel? How lacking in love are you?
The protagonist can only be substituted by you, the author, and we cannot be substituted, and this is doomed to make the novel unpopular. It doesn't matter if you say it is ordinary or ugly, but if the protagonist is short, ugly, and fat, I am sure that 99.999% Of the people will not be able to accept this novel. Even if you change it later, most of the people will have been persuaded to leave.
After reading nearly 50 chapters, the main character's appearance description looks like this...
The subject matter is good, but the sense of immersion is too poor. Even if he is over 30, he is still short and fat, with pits on his face. If you try using this image to write a heroine, will anyone see it?
It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a little ugly, as long as the emotional line is well drawn, everyone will enjoy watching it. What makes us readers disgusted is that the protagonist relies on his golden finger to forcibly modify a woman's mind to make her fall in love with him and become obsessed with him like a slave. What era are we in now? No one likes to read harem stud stories for a long time! What's more, it's an X slave created by modifying the brain! What everyone likes is pure love!
Very nice. . Has the potential to be a big hit. 🙂🙂
This book is very well written. The author's character creation is very mature, and he successfully shows us the degeneration of a middle-aged man who has no ambition, strong power, and lack of self-control. From being ugly and cowardly when he doesn't know how to use golden fingers, to being cruel and cold when he becomes strong. An image of a successful villain appears on the page. I have now seen the part where Butterfly Ninja and Kanahu died, it was so awesome! Pass! Refined! Color! Got it! The author perfectly portrayed in my mind a pervert who lacked humanity and was self-centered. I don't know if the author deliberately set the pig's feet like this, but the author should know one thing. If this book is not an invincible novel but a suspenseful one, I would be blown away by the fact that the male protagonist makes two women rush to the street! But the author can't even classify the book well. Readers of Wudi Wen are not here to read the male protagonists torturing women and killing the harem. What we want to read are cool articles! It's a group of male coaches who pretend to be cool and go to various places to capture Crystal Palace! I'm not here to see the history of growing up a fat house! The word "tool" in the article is so appropriate. The wanton play with other people's feelings and thoughts deeply shocked me, who had never read such a book before.
A note to latecomers. The author Ge Yingren is very good at it. In the child-killing chapter, he frequently focuses on describing the protagonist, who is short, fat, with pits on his face, and even more disgusting When it comes to talking about people's names behind their back, they are always written in the form of sneezing. The author is very special, and he also focuses on the description and makes the boogers come out. The character change is also very strange The child-slayer arc is over for the time being, and we travel through Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba again. All the tool-men in the child-slayer arc are wiped out. The protagonist has no special emotions, he is just a tool-man. There is a vague description of liking those tool men earlier, but that is false. There is also something obvious. In the Zhanzhan chapter, I took some attribute medicine and the like. Once I got to Demon Slayer, I became a weak chicken again. I was attacked by a wolf, but Tanjiro in the beginning of Demon Slayer was saved with an axe. It also focused on describing how weak the protagonist is. . I don't want to watch it anymore, I feel like Demon Slayer will taint him. My personal guess is that the author has a mental illness and likes to make fun of others. It is recommended that he go to a mental hospital for treatment as soon as possible and wish him a speedy recovery.